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Kageichi

Void: You must understand that perfection is not a thing we want. If everything was perfect there would be no uniqueness in the world. But you mentioned you can control the space and distance of things. Does that also mean you can bring our friends closer to their destination as well? Gastro: While we understand your need to rest we may need you to wake up soon. Your monster pack will need your strength when the time comes.

Lee Evergreen

(I wont ask to make it an official command unless a bunch of people agree with me, but what if we guide Void to the original Voxtaur body? Then he would have his eyes back and possibly a little of his voice.) Jack: Be extremely cautious when dealing with the kangaroo monster! If it touches you our you hear its voice you will be worse than dead! It would be best to run and get away since he basicly can't be killed unless you destroy his hole body at once, basicly atomizing him. We will seal your sence of hearing for a short time so that wont be an issue, and we will protect you from our more fickle brothers illusions until you've gotten away from him. We dont know if the extent of our illusionary abilities when used on the traitors but I'll kick him in the balls to hopefully distract them. (You know what kick them all in the balls for me please, I think they kinda deserve it.) Heart: Is there anything we need to do to summon the arms? We read in his file that we need a slaughter, but is that all, it seems too simple for one of you entity's. And would they have to use the ones doing the slaughter as the vessel or could we guide him back here to use one of the Monster Squad as a vessel? Also stop giving vague and cryptic answers to our questions, we are in a life or death situation and we are losing our collective patience.

Anonymous

Void: Hello void! Yes, one your beings, the voices, has run rampant on the world, absorbing the fingers and eyes into himself. He currently lost his way to lust from a virus going around. He's vary dangerous on his own, being the main reason all the monsters in the facility are in danger. That being said there's currently a cure on lvl 3 and one of the voice's body is there too. If you could somehow help us get the cure to the Voices, that could help. I'm worried about what he will do but if he's calm and willing to talk, I think we can get him to understand our side. Voxotour voice: (if the cure hasent been administered to voxotour voices) hey dude, you having a good time? I bet you are. If you look to your left you'll see the small little toy robot on the floor. Its the latest in pleasure technology and designed to give extreme euphoria. All you have to do is eat it. (If the cure has been administered) hey Truthsayer its us! Heh after all those times you've saved us, seems like the shoe is on the other foot) We met another part of you but they were being overfilled with the virus going around. We totally didn't leave you on purpose before, and we'll give you the pink feeling again if you just work with us for a second. Idk if your in the right mind to talk but I'll like to have a couucil meeting between you, the eyes, the fingers, the heart, and the void (the guy you other being came from) if you'd agree to it, I think the void can create a space for us all to talk.

Anonymous

(If We give the void to anyone It should be Someone who is Strong or someone who won't hesitate to act on our command. I nominate Roro Keith & Harvey) To Charles:Calm Down Getting Stressed About that portal stuff won't help now. Think of it as a Temporary boost in strength to keep the one's you love safe. To Legion:I know Right! It's so interesting! I'm leaving it to you to help Chuck use this new ability in other Ways. If possible teach him how to split in to multiple Chuck's.

Anonymous

Also since I do feel a bit naughty among other things, I'ma gonna use my one action to unseal the Jack's hearing so he can hear the kangaroo. (I defo could do more but I'm interested to see how far the kangaroo can go)

Anonymous

The Gorilla Drone Comands the T-Zorcs to find, attack and infect the puppets with this new custom strand, and buy time for the floor to flood. Then decends back into the tunnels make its way to Voxotaur to protect him and the eye and bring him into the safety of the tunnels. Temporarily enveloping him to protect him from the drone/ cure and other outside influences.

Anonymous

(Also That Suit you put Voxotaur in is Clean as Hell BC!)

Hinner

Demons: Hey, you can use truth to do a lot of stuff, right? But what exactly is this truth, how does that work? Is it like a reagent that you only have to use for conjuring up the lies, or is it more like a fuel that you have to constantly spend for the lie to keep going? Keth, why did your toughening up lie fail? Legion, why don't you use a shapeshifting to heal your leg? I'm sorry if these are stupid questions but I really want to understand better your powers, specially when they have been so useful so far. Pepi: Hey Pepi, since you became a portal, did you notice anything about yourself that changed? Any evil split personality with murderous intent? Any weird growths on weird places? Any psychic ability? Maybe your power to turn your body parts into laser beams began after that whole ordeal? OFF: Hey BC, I've broken up those questions in different lines just so it is easier to read. Although I'm guilty of some of them, these walls of text are really rough on the eyes, I mostly just skip them and try to gather the meaning from the characters answers, I couldn't be bothered to read even the one I made myself. Maybe asking people to break them into paragraphs in the disclaimer would be enough? I don't mind reading a lot of stuff from the same voice, it's the walls that are so... ugh. I mean, just read -this- wall of text and tell me you don't agree. Anyway, it's the 69th MonsterSmash post, yay! EDIT: Yang: Hey, are you the tag hanging on the hat you're wearing? (If yes): Then are you possessing that body? Are you a ghost? (If not): Then what is it for?

Crowbar

Ahhhhhhh! I dunno what to suggest but this chapter was really good!!

Cid

Holy shit, Voxotaur in a suit looks amazing. I wonder what Voids powers allow him to do, I'm all for giving him a vessel since he seems to be on our side. Everyone on our side: I'm going to take some precautions against the power of the voices and cut off everyone's ability to hear except for Gastro and Pepi since they're immune to them. I'll create a psychic link between everyone so that you can talk regardless of distance and to nullify the downsides of not being able to hear each other while also heightening all your other senses except for smell to the max. We don't want you guys to have a higher susceptibility to the Zorc virus due to smell. If you wish to speak to someone who is not in your immediate area just think of them and we'll connect you. This will allow us to have a clear understanding of the situation at all times. It also makes sure no one is susceptible to influence by the voices. Our ghost friends: You know Doctor something has been on my mind for a while now, who would've known you were such an exhibitionist? You've been floating around in the nude for so long now I'm starting to think you like the attention. I would expect something like this from the others, but from you? I'm honestly surprised, to each their own I guess. By the way that Zorc you guys are looking at is the Truthsayer, we've been wondering what he has been up to but I guess we know now. Best not to disturb him since he seems to be out of action for now and that is a good thing to say the least. (If Void wants to do something like what the Heart did, then we should totally give him to Keth.)

WorgenRouge

((Hey Blazingcheeks wondering if there’s a typo: is Subject 9 on the second floor right now, or the first floor? You say 2nd in the text but you also mention tunnels and it looks like the scenery of the 1st floor))

Crowbar

"Heart, the creature we have dubbed The Void says you're lying. He says you all killed him long ago to gain independence... don't worry, I like you a lot better, so no judgement, but it does seem like someone else is going to be after you soon. Should we set up a conference between you and him?" Gives Heart a vision of the Void creature.

Alex

I vote the void inhabit either Lucas or gastro. Also Lucas your not King of the Zorc Rats, your King of the horny Mens. An Image appears in Lucas head of him as King of horny Men surrounded by his Harem of Men.

Cid

I'm not sure I follow? Void will stay sentient regardless of who he inhabits so I don't think giving it to someone who will listen to what we say matters all that much. I just want to give it to Keth since I love him.

WorgenRouge

JACK: You’re hiding something specific, aren’t you? A particular memory, or a weapon you’re waiting to use? The former would be unlikely to make us feel much worse about you and might even give us the ability to help you more, so don’t be so sure about keeping it to yourself. If it’s the latter, then just watch that you don’t make things worse for yourself when you use it- you need the voices ALIVE and FUNCTIONAL in order to help you, and there’s another entity at play now that might well be more of a problem than the voices. In any case, I sure hope whatever you’re reaching into your pocket for can repel the power of the Voices AND the Fingers simultaneously. Otherwise I suggest you just run for now. Believe it or not I’d actually prefer if you stay in one piece, ideally an un-fucked one. HEART: It’s going by the name of Void, and it’s fully awake now, preparing to enter a vessel (not sure who yet). It claims you and the others murdered it to free yourselves- I’m not looking to condemn, just curious about the particulars. What do you think the voices would do if we tell them about Void? Will that knowledge make them more likely to work with us? Being absorbed by its old body seems worse than listening to us all day, no? Or will that just cause the voices to rush even harder to absorb you and end the world? Oh, one other thing. Void says it wants to make everything perfect. Does it realize that we might like things at a certain level of imperfect? Or is it going to destroy everything we love in pursuit of that perfection? Ultimately it seems a lot more dangerous than you let on, based on its words alone.

Lee Evergreen

Yeah it's barely been a few hours and I'm seeing alot of different suggestions for vessels so maybe you should open a pole on here for that, BC.

Neth Rusiki Azhti

*i eat the paste to regain my strength, carry the rest of it in the backpack and put on the clothes* the zorcs: ... hurr ... lets head to the 2nd floor, my zorcs ...hurrr.... carry your king. helmet zorc: You, stud ...hurr... Go back to where you first met me. There's a piece of golden jewlery ...hurr... from a mummy laying on the floor near there.... hurr... Bring it to me... I'll be waiting. *When the elevator starts moving, I let go of my control over the zorcs until we all reach the 2nd floor, so they can go wild. Then I want to test some of the extent of our control of the virus, and make it so that the infection changes the zorcs physically: I want these zorcs to sprout a simple tail.* other patrons: Be very careful with VOID... hurr... he seems even more dangerous than the VOICE. We wouldn't want to jump out of the frying pan and into the fire. Take it slow. Talk to the HEART.

Neth Rusiki Azhti

hey guys! uhhh, give me suggestions as to what I should do! i have a pretty clear, straightforward plan to bring down the infection a bit, but it'll take a while, and im not sure what to do in the meantime! and if you think i should do something different, also let me know! we always get a few days to change our comments, so i'll tweak mine 'till i cant anymore. (also, let whoever is worried about the infection know that we're helping with that!) ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- There's so much going on! I hope all the action dies down soon, so BlazingCheeks isnt too overwhelmed. And also, that part with Travis was so funny! T'was the best xD

Anonymous

Travis Gagnon has been infected by the psychic fucking Lucas gave him and is transformed into a muscle-bound zorc rat. He is overwhelmed with lust for his ex-boyfriend / current king and sets off to find him.

AnotherMeekOne

To the masturbating Voxotaur: Use the voice. Call out to the ghosts. Command them. Recruit them. Use them.

Anonymous

Kangaroo Voice lets out a distorted maniacal laugh as he lands, amused the old fool thinks he has a chance of saving himself. "Such a delicious hunk of meat... I'm gonna make you howl, pup" the drone says, drooling, "Now, don't move." he commands, freezing Jack on the spot. The drone grins wide as he grows larger and gives Jack a lick before picking him up and swallowing him feet first! The wolf easily slides down the roo drones' velvety throat. Kangaroo voice lets out a loud wet belch, before opening his mouth unnaturally wide. We can see Jack's head! He's being forced to 'wear' Kangaroo Drone like some kind of perverted kigurumi!! Inside feels disgustingly good, every square inch of Jack's body assaulted by soft tingling waves of pleasure. Of course, he has to fit the suit. Jack's body grows larger to fit the suit's proportions, his package growing so big it makes the drone's own shaft bulge! "Welcome to the first day of eternity" he whispers in Jack's ear.

Anonymous

(If this is too much in one post I totally understand and happy for you to ignore it) "Now where is that stupid head?..." The drone mutters to himself, turning his attention to Jack's accomplice now that the wolf is neutralized. He picks it up, "You worship the Master too, don't you? But you can't serve him like this" In an instant Kenji is turned into a Beholder. He grows a skin made of latex, and his mouth is a zipper. He looks like a floating gimp mask with a pair of large horns on his head. "Much better"

Anonymous

Really think Travis should probably be left as a one off joke lmao

Anonymous

Can we check in on how Gastro is healing up the in the "mind palace" there? To Heart: Would someone who's a portal be a potential vessel for The Void? In a round about way we could make this work for us by having it "Fix" the portals who are getting changed and healing them?

Newt

For patrons: Narratively speaking, based on the hearts reaction, and the state the truthsayer is in now, the Void guy seems like a scary final boss type entity in disguise, and the truthsayer is just a feral animal. The way the void describes his power sounds like the ability to teleport things at a whim, which sounds utterly terrifying considering the track record of these crazy eldritch beings. I'll let the winged guy have fun gooping on everyone cause i'm sure if anything goes wrong everyone is just gonna dogpile him and try to take it back. Werewolf jack is a minor character in all honesty so I won't worry about him either. The rat guy can go for it cause honestly, I dig it. So far, I'm honestly rooting for this zorc king guy's method, since if the fingers zorc virus can mind break the truth sayer like that, then the zorc king mind have the strongest chance at fixing shit. I'd have to ask him to try to uninfect one of the orcs and reverse the zorkening, because then if that works, we could infect the ghost and have him go around with the cure strain to fix everyone....i think. Just an idea.

Newt

For BC: no actions. i'll wait till shit calms down lol

Xeralex

(wonder if they ever fix this problem where patreon erases the comments -w-...) ____________________________________________ To Lucas: (A vision of Voxotaur shows in front of Lucas looking a little embarrassed ) Hmmm... I think we might over did it with the illusions back there... But not to worry Lucas my boy, there is still a way to get you back in shape. First we must take you back to floor one and meet up with the Zork-king. He will help you out to not loosing yourself completely to all this! Come along now big guy! the elevator is that 'way! (Voxataur illusion shows his back side to make Lucas follow him to the elevator, to floor 1) to Dr. Gounden: OK, I hope we don't regret this later but now it might be the only best time for this! Doc! This is our original body! And it seems like the Truthsayer has neglected it and it has just end up being nothing more than another zorc body, but this can change! One of us is going to enter it, just as a precaution, now that we still have a chance! Please use the cure on it, if it is really like this! The other patrons are already using there powers to create a new antidote for all this, so it will be ok! If not, I suggest you to take the cure as far as away from as soon as possible. The part of us is entering right now! I'm counting on you!! ( I enter inside the Zorc-Voxotaur's body, and as soon as I do, I try to make it so no other patreon can enter for now. )

Anonymous

At heart: So, essentially you guys used to be a single entity, with limitless energy (you, the heart), more or less omniscience (the eyes), the ability to shape matter and mind pretty much any way you like (fingers and voice), destroy/kill things (arms) and on top of that, you could manipulate time and space??? So the thing in the basement is essentially the corpse of GOD, who, btw says that you guys killed it by splitting off of it. Also, it still seems bent on creating a perfect world and somehow I think that doesn't sound too good.

Trencalos

Gorilla Voice: You are hungry! You must grow stronger than the other voices! Absorb the Zorcs! Merge their voices into yours! Grow! Consume them all! Merge! Merge! Merge!

Anonymous

[Just a heads up, Voxotaur isn't an empty vessel. It's just been on charge so to speak. So I don't think you'll be able to enter it or control it. Voxotaur and the Truthsayer are linked I believe. And it also has the Eye which even the drones do not have access to. So it makes it even less likely.]

Anonymous

The Winged Drone stays put making sure the the liquid goop spreads down all corridors. It flaps it's wings, releasing parasitic head/ butt huggers from its feathers, that can easily navigate the walls and black sludge to hunt down the puppets and lay seeds of corruption in them into slaves to Master and drones.

Anonymous

Void, this might be a strange question but, why do you take the form that you do? No other animal on earth holds themselves the way humans do (bipedal, four limbs, back erect). Is it coincidence? Is it a choice? Or is it something else?

Plague

Jack: Okay Jack, I still don’t trust you but I really don’t want you taken out like this. I’ll see about filtering out this guy’s voice and if I can’t do that I’ll just mute everything.

Anonymous

Okay, change of plans (I hope this isn't too late...), now we change the virus to infect ghosts, and make it a milder strain that doesn’t do drastically affect the infected’s mind, basically what Neth said. Wait until we have a sizable collection of Zorcs in our sphere of influence, then command, “My loyal hoard... Hurr hurr… listen to your king and obey, our most important command… our empire is at risk before it has even begun… hurr… it is time, you must run ahead, storm the third floor!!... DESTROY the cure before it is too late… hurr hurr… and FUCK ANYONE WHO TRIES TO STOP US IN THE ASS!!” Though stop the two Zorks who are carrying us from leaving, we still need a few servants to help us.

Neth Rusiki Azhti

Sorry about stopping that thing you tried to do! >~< We dont really know the extent of our abilities, and we need to test things out a bit more. And honestly I'm thinking about gaining the ability to infect ghosts a little later. If we have ghosts that can infect people with a BETTER virus, then its a win win for everyone too! But we have to make sure that altering the virus in this way is possible, first. I even have a cool way to alter our body in a way to gain that ability! Instead of gaining a "ghost hand", I was thinking we could make our arm like Chuck's arm, like a skeleton, but covered in gooey and rubbery ectoplasm. ALSO, something important I want to bring to your attention... is that our time here is limited. Eventually the screen will reform and we're gonna be ejected from the story. So no matter how you look at it, we cant be the benevolent zorc king you're looking for... We can make everyone zorcs, which is everything we can do as subject 9, AND something I WANT TO keep doing, but I dont want to mess with people's will and consent. I wanna give them the choice of getting cured at least, 'cuz they'll end up cured, dead or worse when we leave the story. They can't run away or fight the Truthsayer if they're busy having an orgy. They can have sex if they're safe and not busy (such as what happens in elevators, or when they're far away from the Truthsayer, but we cant make them do it without giving them something in return, something to be relieved or happy about.

Anonymous

Explain to the heart and the group, we made full contact with the final entity, the original one, we named him void for convenience's sake, as well as it being basically all that is left of him, he wants to help, but he is asking for a vessel, much like how sidan is carrying the heart, we ask that you all think together and decide if any of you is willing to allow him in, we won't force him into any of you, and aren't even sure yet if it's a good idea, but at least have the thought in mind for when we have everything cleared out with him. To void: please, we don't wish for this world to be perfect, perfection makes everything stale, the more you all meddled with it the worse things got, all we are asking you is to help protect what is already there, exactly because we find what already exists beautiful, we are glad you loved us enough to try and bring a better world just so we could come back, but what is already here is at risk now, and all we want is to protect it before the damage done is permanent, we will ask for one of our friends to be a vessel for you, but we beg you to please promise not to mess with them in any way, or the world for that matter, we do not want to harm them in any way possible, and if you do try to harm them we will be left very sad.

Anonymous

Hey Void, just a piece of advice. Don't strive for perfection, not just because it's impossible, but because it's the flaws that make something special. Like people, no one person is 'perfect', but they still move forward and try their best, the effort to improve is what makes them so admirable. And that's why we love the people here, because they're *not* perfect, and so they're like *us*. Like *you*. And if people can become better, then you can too. Hey Gastro, please, have some sweet dreams. You've earned it.

Fe5ter

((I'm in favor of having Pepe being the vessel for Void due to his immunity to COMMANDS and how the mummy places his full trust on us. Plus Pepi is an ideal candidate in a thematic sense e.g. Light and Space. Really don't want Lucas or Keth to be harmed.)) ------------------------------------------ Void: Please help us save our friends' world, Void. Can your Spatiokinesis not only affect targets physically but mentally as well? As in distort or displace the thoughts and minds of Truthsayers and The Traitorous Drones'. Have em... spaced-out. ((Provide the exact location of the inhabitants we grew fond of along with Truthsayer and his subordinates.)) Our Allies: For those that are not Portals, this deafening silence will take some getting use. As a countermeasure, while we'd heighten your other senses we also implemented a "Danger Sense" so you'll instinctively know which direction a threat is coming from before a hostile strikes. ((We bestow a Spider-Sense sort of ability, an extension of the Psychic Links we've formed with the group. Their brain intakes and responses to stimuli at an accelerated rate, acting as a precognitive ability to sense potential or immediate danger. In the event we lose a party member to Truthsayer's actions, We immediately sever the Psychic Link with the unfortunate victim to prevent the entire network from being compromised or studied.))

Anonymous

I'm late but thanks for giving Keth his head pats!!! ♥️

Robert Smith

I would like to give visions of distracting and entrancing spirals to all the monsters, to throw attention off from my main goal- distracting Jack so he loses the fight with the drone. Additionally, the spirals should lure Keth into thinking he sees Voxtaur, beckoning him away from the group

Xeralex

(Hey Muku, sorry to send you this way, But can i ask you something for a moment?, it has to do with the next monster smash part. if you can text me)