Script for animated short story (Patreon)

This is the draft script for my animated short story that I'm hopefully gonna get voice acted. In the last poll you chose the OnlyFans scenario so that is what I went with. Tell me if you approve or add a comment with suggestions!

M = Monica (Stepmom), S = Son, D = Dad

*family having dinner*
M: Can you help me with some "work" after this?
S: Uhh... Sure...
M: I thought you'd say yes *winks at him*
D: Don't tell me you guys are gonna make a "fan video" again! I won't allow it!
M: Well, if you could perform properly I wouldn't have to ask him... You know you can't afford your loans without the money we get from this.
D: *hmpfs and growls*
*M touches S's raging boner through his pants*
M: Actually, I think we're gonna go right now. Will you be a sweetheart and do the dishes meanwhile?
*D's face turns red with rage but he keeps silent* 

*they go into the bedroom*
M: I'm thinking today's video is gonna be a titty fuck. Would you like that?
S: *nodding* Uh-huh...
M: You can just sit down on the bed and record and I'll take care of you.
*they start making the video while D secretly watches them from behind the door*
*S finishes, covering her tits and face*
S: Imagine if they knew it's your actual stepson in these videos...
M: *looks confused* They do. I've put it in the title in all videos.
S: What?!
D: *barges in* You told all your subscribers about this?!
M: Tee-hee. Yeah, of course. How else do you think we're making thousands of dollars a week from these videos?
*she picks some cum off her face and tastes it while looking D in the eyes*
M: *laughing* You better get used to this!