Unused strip for July 04, 2023 (Patreon)

While digging up that scooted-back Sarah strip, I may have found a few other unused/rewritten strips I missed which I can throw at you.  Here's at least one!

okay that original punchline, that might've been a bit too much

it's not even the gayest thing in my discarded punchlines

honestly you can only do so many Joyce Says A Thing And Sarah Raises A Brow, y'know?

Anyway, also: Maggie didn't like first panel Dorothy's original line about why she was feeling despondent re:Jason.  She felt Dorothy was stretching here a bit, even for her.  Dorothy's gotta know Robin's not gonna hire a Freshman, even if Dorothy once tried to be an R.A.  And so the better line here is Dorothy feeling beat down by the inequities in the system.  It finds a wrinkle in Robin's gesture towards Leslie, despite its intended innocuousness.  

Final strip below: