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This scene is coming together and I think it will be ready really soon. Even after my last post -- the one where I'm explaining how writing multiple variations of the scene is considerable effort compared to writing a single version -- I was caught offguard by how challenging this turned out to be. Instead of simply saying "Take my word for it," I'd like to give an example:

Given a certain context, if Eva climbs a tree, you might say:

"Think you can jump all the way back?"

Or, you might say:

"Think you can go back the way you came?"

Okay, no big deal. Probably won't make a big difference to whoever's playing. Honestly, nobody may even notice this. But Eva's response will be one of these:

"'Think?' That's stupid."

Or

"'Think?' Thinking is a scam invented by 'Big Education."

Or

"'Think?' Do you know how dumb that sounds?"

Or

"'Think?' Pft. That'll take all day."

One-liners like these take significant time to write. Coming up with variations for the same set up? Even more so. And that was just two sentences: that "template" has thirteen paragraphs

AND!

AND there are a total of four templates for this context. That means four completely different ways it could play out. Here's another one (I've reduced it to a single variation instead of expanding all the possibilities):

"Okay, Eva, what do you think about this. Can you--"
"Trust fall!" She leans back with her arms crossed.

Anyway, I'm really happy with how this is turning out. Does this sound fun to play?! Please let me know what you think. 

As always, thanks for your continued patience. Hope you're all doing great!

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