Help me write the fetish picker blurb? (Patreon)
Published:
2017-09-14 06:15:01
Imported:
2020-09
Content
Here's what I changed it to:
This game has ''a lot'' of fetishes (Click here for a complete list)! As a last resort, you can prevent some of the more controversial fetishes from appearing in the game, but I recommend you leave everything to "Yes" if you can stomach it. They're almost always avoidable and you can skip every scene.
Here's what I think is important to convey:
- There are a lot more fetishes in the game than on the fetish picker list.
- You should leave them to "Yes" even if you can stomach the fetish because:
- 1) You may miss some story if you turn it off
- 2) You can always skip a scene you don't like
- 3) You will almost always be warned before you go into one of these fetishes and have a choice to forget it.
I guess my main fear is people will turn off a fetish, maybe a scene won't make sense, and they'll get a bad impression of the game. Does this blurb convey that or is there a better way to word it?
Thanks for the help!