April WIP Pages I (Patreon)

I like the first two pages in their basic layout, thought some aspects need to be reworked, like adding some matching reaction shots from Princess Claire as she pushes out the last sphere. The last two pages I feel need some more major changes. The perspective on the third page is a little awkward and bland and the fourth page needs a totally different middle panel. Pop Lee agrees that it looks too simplistic and wont turn out very well. Probably do something that focuses more on her balls because I want Princess Claire's balls to basically be anointed before she is milked.