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May Comic Pages (Patreon)

Published:
2020-06-02 12:27:22
Edited:
2020-09-04 17:47:37
Imported:
2022-01

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May comic pages are now out and mark the start of a new chapter "The Equusarian Expansion" 2 years after this Patreon started!

As mentioned before, this chapter will focus on diplomatic relations, not just between Princess Claire and the Equusarians, but between the Entourage members as well! Despite Princess Claire's intentions, though, it seems the Equusarians are deeply suspicious of the Deva. Can Princess Claire overcome the long held distrust between the Deva and the Equusarians and unite the galaxy against the Tzaraks? Find out next month in "Princess Claire: A Royal Endowment!"

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Anonymous

I say this from a place of caring: This comic is experiencing narrative bloat. Here we have an entire month's pages devoted to a cover, a crop of the same cover, and three pages of exposition dialogue. As a writer, I know the temptation of long paragraphs. Notice for instance this one, growing larger by the moment. But a grand epic space opera story of legendary scale and scope is not what I believe most people here want to see. They want the princess and her entourage, being adorable and horny. If you can work some characterization in around that, great, but this is not a novel. It should not read like one. As a cautionary non-porn example, I found the comic Erfworld interesting at first - offbeat, kooky, amusing. Then it jumped out of the comic format entirely and dumped ten to twenty small-font text pages with occasional illustrations on me. Guess if I managed to keep going?

PrincessClaire
>>38876187

I can't say I know exactly what most people want, but we just had a chapter that really rushed past all the narrative to get to the sexy action as quickly as possible and stayed there for almost the entire chapter. In response, many people reached out to me that they were disappointed that there wasn't more focus on the story. This chapter has a lot of the characters being cute and horny, but I'm trying to also focus on the character growth that many people have asked to see. For my own tastes, I think the Princess is acting really cute and horny in this scene, trying to nervously hide her giant dick while acting like a Princess, giving overly elaborate speeches. As a side note, the wallpaper doesn't take away from other pages we would do, its basically an extra Pop Lee is doing for free. I promise there's going to be some pages this month of the Entourage members being cute and horny in private quarters with each other and that MOST of this chapter is Princess Claire learning how to use her giant dick with a new unicorn friend. Much less exposition.