Cyberpunk'ed (pt. 2) (Patreon)

Not sure which version to use, I think I like the first one most but am iffy on the options. Not sure if the floating pixels make it obvious that its a floating digital display. surrounding them. Also don't know if the colored font is too distracting.

A continuation of this, Cyberpunk'ed | Patreon I'm hoping to work on this more. You can also see the sketch for part 3 here: Cyberpunk'ed #3, (WIP1) (see description) | Patreon as I kind of did these out of order. Might even add a different "part 3" in between what is this image and the sketch for the next one as seen in that post.