"Marvellous Eggs" WIP Update 01 (Patreon)

Hey all!

I apologize for the late update.  I really wanted to have a clip available to show today, but unfortunately things did not go as planned.  After rendering the clip, there were far too many things that needed serious polish.  For example, the kissing wasn't polished and it looked more like face-bumping.  And it also didn't help that Black Widow's massive boobs were clipping through Mantis' body for most of the segment.  Unfortunately these are things you have to deal with in early production.

For those who are hoping to see a WIP clip, my plan is to have one next week.  As for today?  I wanted to share the script and treatment of the project.  I know some of you don't like to be spoiled, so I created a link to the script rather than show it in its entirety in this post.  Since the project is early in production, I am open to critique and suggestions.  If a dialogue line strikes you as "corny" or out of place, I'm open to hear your reasoning.

I'm also open to hear ideas for a good scene title.  As of right now, I'm sitting on "Marvellous Eggs" vs. "Mantis Puts Her Eggs In Black Widow".

CLICK HERE TO READ SCRIPT