WIP Yor lines (Patreon)
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This month I would like to ask you to help me find a couple of opening lines of dialogue between Yor and Loid before they start fulfilling their "marital obligations"... because I'm a little in doubt about how to do them and because I want them to be done in the best way possible.
I had something like this in mind. If you think that's too much dialogue and you prefer action over words, write to me. (Although I could actually create a cut version without dialogue).
Yor: Agh.. Loid stop! What are you doing! We didn't agree on this in our prenuptial agreement....
Loid: We talked about this yesterday Yor. We have to do it or your brother will find out our secret.
Yor: But we were drunk and laughing and I thought you were saying that as a joke.
Loid: Do you want your brother to find out? Do you want our deal to be blown Yor?
Yor: ... No, I don't want it to happen ... Alright let's do it though...be gentle.... I am a virgin
Loid: ... 😲😳🤤🤤🤤
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