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Hiromi Mitsunashi

“So treat Motoko as if she was me.” Hiromi added with a glare. To find her Motoko sitting on a bench besides Martinez of all people! Martinez who even Hiromi could admit was good looking and had a tendency to attract attention even from the other corpo girls! Not that any of them allowed themselves time with a boy with no future.

Martinez was smart. Too smart. Martinez was also poor. Too poor.

“Yeah, I got it. She’s the Ghost! I can’t believe I actually met the Ghost, and she’s a teenager too?” Martinez still looked a little bewildered, and awed at the sudden meeting, something Hiromi could only accept.

Motoko had that effect on her-People. Motoko had that effect on people. Especially when she was being all cuddly and leaned in close with a smile, and she was sure that Motoko was going to press her lip-”Buee!” she nearly squealed, shaking her head and pressing her cool fingers against her cheeks to try and cool off.

Motoko was too strong!

“Hiromi?”

“It’s still Boss, Martinez.” She didn’t quite snap, but reminded him. It was important to make sure underlings understood their positions in any company.

“Sure. Boss.” He responded full of sarcasm.

Martinez was… a difficult underling. Some days he was completely out of sync, almost depressed, some days he was snarky, and those were the days that got him in trouble with the rest of the class.

Hiromi didn’t care though, because Martinez was a good salesman once she had gotten him to stop trying to sell BD’s out of dark corners, and constantly looking around like the NCPD were coming to collect his stock.

Fucking gonk. This was Arasaka Academy. There were no teachers or staff here that would disrupt a small business! We were the future of Arasaka NC! Of course we had to understand how businesses functioned, including success and failure.

Everyone had thought he was doing something creepy while selling his BD’s so despite having pretty good stock through his old source he had barely managed any sales.

Cause Martinez was the dumbest smart person Hiromi had ever met.

He had zero street smarts. Which was really shocking for a kid that was so poor.

Hiromi had only had to see Mrs. Martinez once, to understand though.

David was fucking spoiled.

If Hiromi’s mother acted even half as affectionate as Gloria Martinez, Hiromi was sure she would have died in embarrassment.

“Remember the eddies Martinez. Now. I have work to do. Excuse me.” She added and the mention of money jerked the boy's spine right up. Sure Martinez was a moody kid, but well…

Eddies got him nice and compliant.

It was chump change honestly. Even without Section 9’s cash flow the money for the BD’s and XBD’s was literally pocket change, but for Martinez?

It meant he had pocket change for a change, and Hiromi was very free with employee percentages.

Right now her goal wasn’t to pull every eddy to profit, but to expand.

Martinez was a part of it. Covering Arasaka Academy from the inside.

Nox was another, as both supplier of the Mox collection, as well as a pseudo partner, although she had long ago taken over the leadership position.

He still griped about it, but only until the weekly profits came in. That always shut him up.

Straight Lane Shooters acting as a third connection to her burgeoning XBD empire. The gang was still working on their income streams, but Hiromi had cut them in. Letting them sell her stock for a majority of the profit in exchange for another benefit.

Hustle. Hired Muscle.

Nox often had two of the bigger SLS boys guarding his ass, and it had worked extremely well.

The SLS were expanding in their area, not through hostile acts, but through being a supplier of easy entertainment.

Hiromi had even set up a local net site, where customers could order over the Citinet, and a SLS boy would drop off their desired BD’s right to their door!

Considering how many BD Junkies there were in NC? Oh yeah. Every new customer was a nice bundle of eddies on the weekly.

And all of the revenue streams zipped up the tree right into her hands.

“Heh… Hehehehehehe!” She burst in laughter at how well everything was going. Hiromi had used to think corpo shit like this had been boring, but that was before she had created a company underneath her!

Well her and Motoko, and even Malcolm and Ichi. In her mind the two boys were sub leaders more than anything.

Motoko of course was co-leader. Hiromi might be proud of her work building income streams, but Motoko is the one that made it all happen. That and the real income was from Section 9 duty, and Motoko was undoubtedly in charge there.

Ah! The sight of Motoko being all serious, and deadly serious, and utterly utterly lethal…

Hiromi cooled her cheeks once again. Hiromi had once been interested in Jun a little. Enough at least to use him to tease Motoko. Enjoying how the girl had always become outraged that Hiromi flirted with her older brother. Well before the coma anyways. Afterwards she hadn’t cared at all that Hiromi tried to flirt with Jun.

But Hiromi hadn’t needed to feign interest in the dangerous gangster boy. Not when Motoko had turned herself into such a deadly woman.

Hiromi still checked every Motoko BD, and was still thrilled every time at the casual lethal grace Motoko now moved with.

You wouldn’t notice it at first, or at least she hadn’t, but feeling every muscle shift and move as Motoko scaled a wall, or battered scavs to death was an intimate experience.

“Mistunashi.” A voice interrupted her daydream and she scowled.

“Hmm? Oh, it’s you Tanaka.” She confirmed. The boy wasn’t someone Hiromi usually would have needed to interact with. Being a year ahead of her, same as Martinez, but she had to for her employee.

That was how Hiromi had first interacted with Katsuo Tanaka. She almost wished she hadn’t had to.

“You’ve done an acceptable job handling Martinez. He hasn’t caused nearly as many issues since you took him under your wing. My congratulations.” The boy offered snootily, that ugly smirk on his face only making Hiromi want to punch him.

“What do you want Tanaka?” She demanded, not at all interested in dealing with this. Idly she reached up and adjusted her tie. The Arasaka academy uniform wasn’t the most comfortable thing. She almost envied Martinez and his casual disdain for dress code.

“Simply to request a meeting. Tonight? Dinner, my treat of course. Dark Matter? My father has an open pass of course. I figured we can discuss… Business.”

Hiromi was flabbergasted, caught completely flat footed.

“What?” She asked and then instantly shook her head, stupid question. “What are you talking about Tanaka, we don’t have any business together.”

“Not so. Not so. Father mentioned how impressed he was with your handling of the downed AV cargo. The fact you are already leading a mercenary strike team? When he heard that it was one of my peers. Well Father wanted us to have a closer relationship.”

You mean, your father realized how much of a disappointment you are for not being on my level. Was what Hiromi really wanted to say. To watch Tanaka crumble into the petulant child he really was.

The funny thing was, despite all the problems he gave David, Katsuo was one of the least respected members of the Academy.

He just couldn’t do anything without his father holding his hand.

“Listen. Tanaka. I’m busy with work, and I don’t have any interest in cutting you in, or joining up with you. You just don’t bring any value in my eyes for a merger.” Hiromi said, eyes looking down on the taller boy with every ounce of apathy she could bring.

Tanaka took it as well as he did any critique.

“You wannabe street rat bitch! You think I actually want to be around you? You stink like Martinez. My father was wrong. You have no value, and I’ll make sure you remember that!”

“Sure Tanaka. We done? Yes. We are.” She decided to not even give him the power to argue the point. She walked away.

She was surrounded by kids playing at being corpos.  The thought made her scoff as she was practically one of them.

No way could Hiromi have done this without Motoko handling the difficult bits. But having valued personnel was a skill all on its own, something she had learned that had changed her world.

She might never rise as high as Tanaka in the company, because he would be pulled up by his father, but that was fine. Because Tanaka would never be more than just a company boy.

Hiromi? Hiromi would have her own assets, her own company, and her own projects. She would stay with Arasaka, but she wouldn’t be just another drone like Tanaka.

—--

We were hanging out on the couch together watching some TV, but it wasn’t a relaxing experience.

Jun wass purposefully ruffling the bag of ants! They were ants! Ants are ants! Not food! He was doing it just to watch me jerk away from them.

I didn’t even want to look at the damned things! They had been in my mouth! I now knew the texture of ants!

“Heh.” Jun chuckled as he grabbed a handful and tossed them into his mouth. He was doing it on purpose!

“I hate you.”

“Heh!”

I considered punching him, but Jun still had a nuclear weapon in his lap. What if… What if he chucked them at me or something!? I could get them in my hair! I don’t think I could mentally handle that!

So I just casually moved away from him, yep super casual. Not squirming and flinching at all. Nope!

“I’m gonna go do something! In my room!” I decided that a tactical retreat was in order and Jun just kept smirking at me as I flipped over the back of the couch, sliding into a tumble to let me land on my feet at my door.

Yep. Just going to avoid that whole thing.

Inside my room the Tachikoma piece was nearly finished, but I didn’t want to sit there and just look at it, so I grabbed my guitar and hooked it into my amp.

To get back at Jun just a little I belted into the opening strings to Chippin in.

Singing it at the top of my lungs just utterly belting it out made me feel better and probably annoyed Jun so there you go.

Then on my third repeat of the song my 3d printer finally finished, and I hurried over, quickly pulling out the piece of casing and putting in the feeder material for the next section, loading it up and then starting it up again.

Then because I wanted to be a little shit, I walked back to where I was grabbed my guitar and started the song back exactly where I had left off.

That finally got me a reaction.

“MOTOKO! CUT IT OUT!” Jun yelled from the living room, loud enough I could actually hear it over the song. That finally earned him some relief as I stopped playing and toned down the volume before jumping back into it, at a much more reasonable level.

I was trolling Jun, not trying to be an asshole.

But then as I was starting up, there was a knock on the door. None of my chooms were supposed to be coming over. I put the guitar down and grabbed my Lexington from the holster and met Jun who just rolled his eyes as he saw me come out of my room armed as he walked to the door.

At least grab the door gun Jun! The Tactician was for this exact thing!

But he ignored it and opened the door.

“Uh, hey.” Jun offered looking surprised and I concealed my lexington in the back of my pants as I wandered over to see.

“Hey neighbor. I was uh… Oh.” She remarked upon seeing me.

It was Rockerboy Neighbor. She was standing at the door, hand idly twirling a bit of her techhair that was flashing slowly to her heartbeat…

FLIRTING! RED ALERT!

I glared as I hurried over grabbing Jun’s arm and narrowing my eyes a bit at her.

“Can we help you?” I asked, making my point clear. She just looked a little awkward for a second before seeming to cool down and then flashed a smile.

“Hey I just heard you playing and stuff. Samurai? That’s nova, oldschool, but nova, we should jam sometime-” She started speaking and the moment I realized what she was going for, I instantly started laughing. Practically busting a gut because she hadn’t been looking at me while saying that.

Worse? Jun looked like someone had fed him something sour.

The look of confusion on the girls was great, and I just laughed and laughed in delight at the natural 1 she just rolled.

“I don’t play guitar.” Jun offered after a moment saving the girl a bit of confusion. “Motoko is nova though. She can play anything.”

I could see the flush go up the girl's pale cheeks at Jun’s statement, and even worse her cool confidence was a bit broken.

She had definitely come here for a chance to flirt with Jun about music.

“Motoko, it's rude to laugh at people.” Jun pointed out to me, because I was absolutely busting a gut.

I brought myself under control, as much as I wanted to just point at Jun and tell him the look on his face was forever my favorite thing. But instead I calmed down to just softer chuckles. “Sorry. Sorry. Yeah Jun.” I said getting myself under control.

I looked at the girl who looked a little lost and felt a bit bad.

She had been rude on our first meeting, but I could be the better person.

Besides that look of disgust on Jun’s face was never going to be forgotten. Mostly because I took a picture.

“That was you?” She finally asked and I nodded.

“Yeah Jun hates Samurai, so I was messing with him by playing it. Wanna jam together?” I asked, surprising the girl with my sudden offer.

“Oh? That would be nice, Motoko's never played with anyone else before.” Jun said, dropping one of his stupid big hands over the top of my head.

It took only half a second for the girl to realize that Jun was a good big brother, and that would be her way in.

“Preem. Sure, I have some time to jam a bit. Let me get my guitar.” She said walking away quickly, and I was pretty sure she needed a moment to reset her plan.

She had definitely come for Jun. I had no doubt she was going to want to play in front of Jun.

I rolled my eyes, silly Rockerboys.

Heading back to my room I grabbed my amp and equipment and hauled it out to the living room.

No way was I letting some random Rockerboy gonk in my room.

A minute later there was another knock at the door, and Jun answered it as I was setting up my stuff.

Rockerboy neighbor was there with a flirty smile for Jun.

“Huh. That’s not the Orphean you had at your gig.” I mentioned cutting in a bit. She was carrying an old beat up Washburn guitar.

She looked to me, and shook her head. “Course not. That’s not a guitar you use while playing around.”

“Gotcha! Well come on in, feel free to plug into the amp. Jun come sit!”

“Yeah yeah.” He muttered laughing as he walked over and flopped onto the couch, although since it was a big circle he had to sit sideways to see. Rockerboy neighbor instantly hurried over and plugged in, and the moment she did I could see she was actually plugged into the guitar as well. Her hair instantly shifted, and as she strummed a few chords to check the sound her hair shifted with her.

That was kinda nova. Should I get Tech Hair like that? Lucy had something like that too and I always thought it was cool.

I shook it off as she strummed a few chords and from the sound I knew she was all set.

So I instantly started into the intro to her own song. The one Violent Hemorrhage had opened their gig with although I didn’t know the name of it.

The look on her face as she jerked up at the sound as I played it perfectly made me smirk. I had to repeat the refrain twice before she shook herself loose and finally joined in.

Then we just jammed. I played the songs Violent Hemorrhage had played the night of their gig. Playing along from memory, and every time I kept up, Rockerboy neighbor looked more and more surprised.

Jun looked sort of meh about the song choices, but I could tell that she didn’t really notice that. Only that his attention was on her, and she strutted under my brother's eyes.

We took a break after a few songs and Jun was a good boy bringing both of us drinks.

“Thanks Jun.” I said as I drank my soda, while Rockerboy neighbor flirted, leaning in a bit as she took the drink.

“Yeah. Thanks.” She offered, and I think even Jun wasn’t dense enough not to notice that level of flirtation.

“Uh. Sure, anytime.” He offered back, and that only made the girl smirk even more wicked.

“So what’s… Okay seriously how do you know every song my band plays? You a super fan or something?”

“No? I saw you play a gig once. The songs were alright, not really my thing.” I admitted with a shrug. “I tend to like older rock more. Or more electronic stuff. I guess.”

“That’s…” She trailed off, glancing at Jun. Probably wondering how to call me a liar or something. It was pretty crazy.

“Motoko is a genius.” Jun said with a smile reaching out and ruffling my hair.

The girl looked like she wanted to argue. Which… Yeah I could feel that. I mean, I had just perfectly played her own songs having only heard them once?

Well I had heard them a few times vaguely, I supposed. She did practice in her apartment, but that was rarely clear enough to do more than vaguely recall the song she was playing.

But that brought me up to another issue.

“So what’s your name anyways?” I asked, and the girl nearly spewed her drink out as she was taking a drink as I asked.

“What you don’t know?”

“You never introduced yourself, and I only know you from the one time I heard you play.”

“Yeah but…” She shook her head. “Alice. Fujimura Alice.”

My eyes narrowed but Jun made an ‘ah’ noise as if it just dawned on him. “Fujimura-Sama’s niece. I remember now. He mentioned you lived on this floor too.”

“Yeah. Oji-san let me stay here while I get my band together. Since it’s closer to all the clubs.” she offered with a shrug.

My narrow eyed look eventually relented and I shrugged. The fact she was related to that jerk face Fujimura didn’t matter much. She was more like me than anything. TC connections but not actually a member.

Couldn’t really get annoyed with it considering that was very similar to me and Jun.

“Alice then, nova. I’m Motoko, since I didn’t actually say that, but you already heard Jun call me that.”

“Yeah. The Kusanagi siblings. I remember Oji-san told me about you when you first moved in. Said the Oni was a good underling, but his sister was difficult.”

“That sounds about right.” I agreed without hesitation. Earning an actual amused look from the girl.

“So know anything besides your own songs?”

“I know a couple songs.” She offered and started up something I had never heard before.

Thankfully with Perfect Musical Memory I caught on and on the second play through I was matching her tempo.

To my surprise, she seemed actually pretty happy to jam out with me.


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A/N

Hey everyone! Been a while since I did any sort of chatting with all of you here.

We are coming up on the holidays, and my schedule is getting a little packed with all the stuff going on. (Including my birthday! Yay!) But that means over the next week, or so, I've got four days where I am going to be busy with family and stuff. 

Small hiatus? Just until the holidays are over? Not sure. I think one of the next posts might get skipped. Probably Xmas post? Anyway. It really depends on how much time I have to write this week.

But I also want to say since we are coming up on a year from when I created this Patreon. On the first of the year. So...

Thank you. All of you. You have no idea how much you have all done for me this year. The opportunities your help has given me, and the happiness of my day to day, even during times where I'm depressed or struggling. The security to be able to create to dedicate time, and to try and hone my craft, even if I still have a long way to go. 


Comments

heh

HIROMI POV HIROMI POV

Ya Boi

Yay!

Eric Hicks

Thank you for the chapter. Musicians do love a good jam session... and the Pov was fun. Happy Birthday. Happy Holidays. I have enjoyed the ride so far, keep up the good work.

Ya Boi

Also thanks for the authors note. No worries enjoy your holidays!

Will Iam

Enjoy teh holidays, it is good that this patreon thing is good for you, having a new chapter from you or casual farmer always brings me a smile. Happy holidays and congrats on the birthday.

Andrew Bazhaw

It's the holidays, feel free to take a break. Looking forward to see what's to come in the next year.

GJealousy

Thanks for the chapter. Hiromi is cute and maybe rockerboy neighbor won't be so bad

Anonymous

Keep up the good work Seras, also take it easy if need to. The better you feel the better the content you create .

Mark James Reyes

Thanks for the chapter. Enjoy the holidays! Glad to be of help. Quid pro quo since your writing helps some of us on our bad days too. Hey, it made me forget my knee pain when I was suffering last month so yeah! Keep up the good work! 🥳🥳🎉🎉

Michael Carter

This is easily my favourite fanfiction ive ever read. And it still has updates! And they're often!!! Love your work Seras, thanks for all the Motoko.

Ottstop

Ah yes. Hiromi the totally best choomer. The choomfie. The totally 100% not waifu. Obviously.

WideWings

Thank you for another new chapter!

Ottstop

Jun wass —> was purposefully ruffling the bag of ants!

TheForgottenKing

Man Jun is becoming a harem protag, that's 3 girls that's flirted with him now hahahahaha 😆

Seras

Yeah I wanted to drop some info on certain things. Like what Hiromi has been up to with all the small business stuff Motoko sort of set up and then ran away from. Hiromi picked it up and is running with it.

Jeff091

take your family time and don't worry

Bosparan

Thanks for the awesome chapter! Had been waiting for the two of them to get their music together :) One thought I had on Alice's voice problem: Couldn't Motoko help her out by recording a BD of her songs, focusing on the vocal chords (given how that perk gave her conscious control over it)?

Eric Hicks

I thought that intentional... to imply that she was whining rather than a typo... but I could be wrong.

Jeff091

only 3? just of the top of my head: his tc partner the bouncer rockergirl Hiromi (if only to mess with Motoko)

PlatiNom

HIROMI POV LETSGOOOOO Rockerboy neighbor seems cool. I've never tried ants, but had a fried cricket once and it was basically a chip with extra steps. Thanks for the chapter!

Kor

I'm going to consider this fic as on hiatus for the next two weeks and any chapter that might pop up as christmas presents and there's nothing you can do about it. Thank you :D

Alex C

Really? Going to try and work through the holidays? Take the freaking holiday and relax. Would be cool to build up a backlog so you can just cover stuff like that and illness. But if that's not your style it's still only the jerks that are going to expect you not to take breaks.

Rakkis157

I am actually in the terminal rn, just waiting to board the plane to the place we are going on holiday. This is a sweet send off gift. Anyways, chapter. Man Hiromi has it baaaaad. I wonder what it is that Tanaka wants? Is he going to *gasps* allow Hiromi the privilege of dating him? That was the impression I got, in which case, shoo! Hiromi is taken! Well, not literally, but you get the idea. Also I was close! I guessed that Fujimura had a daughter months ago. It just seemed obvious to me, with how much of a soft spot he has for the Kusanagi siblings. Turns out it was a niece instead. Only reason I didn't burst my gut alongside Motoko is because I am in a crowded terminal. Also, happy birthday!

SquiddlyWinks

Hiromi, wipe your drool. Happy upcoming birthday Seras, thank you for creating something I look forward to every 3rd day. Merry Christmas as well, may it be happy and bright.

Straven

Take a break, enjoy yourself and the end of another year with the start of another right after. Happy birthday as well, mines Christmas so I honestly don't care much anymore! Thank you for such amazing stories, they've been a balm in the sea of life for me and many others.

Danny R.

I know I can say this and many others, thank you as well! I have been with this story since chapter 50 and I can't believe we are well over 500k words already into this and every new chapter I pause whatever I am doing to read it, it's a constant in my little corner of the world that seems to change and shift so much, so having something there is definitely nice, that being said though, enjoy the holidays and have some good times! You have been working hard!

MikeL

Happy birthday!

MikeL

Now that I think about it, has there ever been a Hiromi POV?

Mikkel Raffnsøe Koefoed

Happy holidays and birthday 😄 I'll be looking forward to your return after new years👍

Artman

Happy Birthday/Xmas.

Seras

I have a backlog! XD The problem is that it's sort of diminishing, and since I won't be able to add to it over the holidays, it would dwindle a little too much for my comfort.

Duke of Coffee

As long that one doesn't steal Motoko music, copyrights are non-existent unless you can back it up with force. 😉

Perf

Happy Upcoming Birth Seras!

David Tawater

Seras, absolutely love that Motoko still is knee cap breaking but also can rock out with the best of them.

Duke of Coffee

Thank you for this Christmas present. Seriously take a 2 week break if you need to, this holiday is best time to enjoy with your family and to celebrate your birthday, and one of the authors I'm following here is taking a 4 four week to rest. 👍

Arcane

Thanks for the chapter and Happy Birthday! Merry Christmas as well! I hope you enjoy the Holidays and your birthday! I know this wouldn't happen, but imagine Yandere Hiromi. Perhaps as a joke chapter in April.

Anonymous

Go take a nice long break, have a happy and healtht author, make every reader go brrrr. So yeah take you time, have fun!

SDCard

Thanks for the chapter! Hiromi POV! Awesome to see and also learn some more about how the BD Business and SLS are being handled. I always thought it weird how little street smarts David seemed to have, good to see it mentioned here. And we even get a Tanana scene - very satisfying to see him trying to flatter her when last we saw him he was being outright dismissive. And a rocker girl scene :D Happy holidays!

Anonymous

Happy for the chapter and Happy Birthday idk when is but the intention counts 🥳

Zio Peppe

Happy birthday and happy holidays Seras!

Zane

Happy birthday, and happy holidays. I hope you enjoy your time with family.

Dominyx Black

Hiromi's PoV was awesome! She's totally gone on Motoko and it's so cute with how dense 'toko is of course. Happy Humbugs and enjoy family time! It's what the holidays are about. But be proud that you have reached out to so many people and shared your vision of 'toko that has us all looking forward to these little glimpses of 'toko and her chooms every few days. Thanks for the words and thank you very much for sharing them.

JustABird

Yay! Best girl POV! And happy birthday Seras! Don't hesitate to make a small pause if you think you need/want to. We've really been spoiled with your regularity so far, I'm pretty sure we can afford to let you breath.

TuscanKB

Enjoy the holidays Seras, we'll still be here!

BananaBobert

Merry Christmas! Happy New Years! Happy Birthday!!!! Also I had been thinking the SLS gang got forgotten in the glut of all the stuff going on, but Hiromi was on top of things. Sasuga Hiromi! Not letting assets go to waste and developing your investments. With the Motoko centric viewpoint and Motoko being very... Motoko, it's good to see what else is going on with the loose threads that Motoko didn't tie up. This also means that my slight worry that the SLS got "ignored" and might be looking to cause trouble is calmed quite a bit. I'm half expecting an mini arc where SLS gets attacked or is in trouble and Hiromi calls in Section 9. SLS gets to see Motoko come in and Motoko all over everything. And afterwards come to the conclusion that they are actually quite content with the generous cut of profits they're getting from the Boss Lady who has a murder hacker and a mech on call.

arnumart

Frankly I do not like the Hiromi liking Mokoto. Besides being creepy because one of them is a kid. Mokoto does not think about Hiromi that way. The anime way of Hiromi liking Mokoto would only work in anime. A real relationship would need communication and support for each other.

Khorne

Thanks for the chapter also yes more hiromi x Motoko

runedead56

Family should always take priority over entertainment. Rest up. Have fun. And we'll see your stories again when you're ready.

Just A Dude

Happy birthday, happy anniversary, and happy holidays!

Aaron Greene

Take some time off man. Family time is important.

Anonymous

I was thinking about the neighbor a few days ago. Wonder how the gremlin will help, annoy, and/or get her to become a better singer.

Null

Thank you for the chapter HBD 🎉 and congratulations in advance! You could maybe make a couple of chapter that are more like this one that instead of advancing the story they are more reactions of other characters and current movement Motoko passing by, maybe even just show us the pov of characters that buy doom and the parkour XBD

Laharl365

Happy birthday 🎂! And happy holidays or Christmas or whatever! This story has been a pleasure to follow so honestly I feel like I should be thanking you! It's not like this fan base is going anywhere, pretty sure we all like this story too much lol! Hope you have a nice break!

Null

Did you know there's a Jhon wick reference somewhere in NC!!

G JP

And the Rockerboy neighbor finally gets a name! Next up, Motoko joins them as Sexy Ghost, Vocalist. Merry Christmas, and Happy Birthday! No better time to take a break and spend time with family.

TheOne320

I sometimes love slice of life chapters. I wish Alice would have heard Motoko sing. Then she would have been even more surprised.

Hal

Happy Birthday! Wow a year now, what a fun journey it's been

Less

Lmao @ Hiromi. She has it real real bad. And Jun's continuing harem adventures is playing out nicely!

Celestin

We finally have a name for Motoko's Salieri. The only question is how quickly Alice will realize that. Motoko right now is just amazing with quickly learning to play other songs, but ultimately probably not much better with her guitar skill than the Rockergirl. But once she starts singing and then reveals "her" songs, it's when the rivalry is going to start in my opinion.

Mark

Really enjoyed this chapter. A great slice of life. Jun is going to have a harem isn’t he…

Apeljohn

Sooo... I'm sliiiightly worried that Tanaka is going to try something "clever" in response to this burn. By which I mean: get his asshole XBD-obsessed Dad to have Hiromi kidnapped by Jimmy Kurosaki the XBD creator or something. This, of course, would be closely followed by Motoko enthusiastically Making An Example. (Once David clued her in.) Could turn into a bit of a proxy war between different Arasaka factions though.

PantherTheory

Merry Birthday and Happy Christmas and/or other end of year holiday tradition. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.

Seras

Yeah a few perspective chapters are important. I haven't been doing them like I should.

Akasha

Unbeknownst to Motoko, Alice knew it was her rocking the building all along, and all of the flirting with Jun is just an attempt to make Motoko jealous. That's why she jumped at the chance to jam together. Motoko simply doesn't notice like she didn't notice Hiromi. Sasuga, Alice-sama. In fact, the entire Jun Bowl is actually a Motobowl, and all of them had the brilliant idea to get to her through Jun. He is so uncomfortable because he knows this and can't decide if he wants to laugh or cry.

Chanserv

Merry Christmas from Germany! Happy to be a patreon. Don't worry about the chapters everyone will understand if you took a holiday break. Thank you for so much content over the time I really appreciate your time you put into this!

Anonymous

Amazing chapter! Loved the interlude with Hiromi but my favorite part was Rockerboy Alice. Came to flirt with Jun, stayed for the epic jam session with Motoko

Michael Hughes

Yes more rockerboy content. I love dense harem protagonist Jun. Careful Rocker Girl his other girl is a cyber psycho Yandere. TFTC and see you next time.

Isley

good chappie and amazin storri have good christmas

Terra

Merry Christmas from PH! :) Thanks for giving us such an entertaining story. Wish I could have more of Jackie tho lol

Special_target

Have a wonderful Christmas!

Vg7

Merry Christmas!

Anonymous

Happy holidays and happy birthday!! I really like to read fiction and fanfiction and your story is one, if not my favorite all time. I like the space between action and slice of life moment with the sometimes pov of secondary characters. I hope for a really long story and the continuing of your progression as a writer. Enjoy yourself for this moment of party and holidays! (even if we all wait for the next chapters)

Hawk

TFTC and Merry Christmas!

Markus

Nice

SDCard

Entirely ignoring the romance part here but I'd definitely say there is communication and support between Hiromi and Motoko - we've had quite a few scenes which really made the friendship between the two. We had a recent chapter where Motoko tries to alleviate Hiromi feeling inadequate, we had a chapter where they literally just hung out together riding their bikes just talking, Motoko is extremely protective of her - like with her very first kill - and so on. Most importantly I'd like to point out the chapter during the early gang war when Hiromi realized the Tyger claw life wasn't for her and Motoko told her she didn't care what she did and she'd still be her friend even if she had to break into Arasaka Tower to visit. So while I agree that there won't be a romantic relationship anytime soon (because Motoko is blind and because these are teenagers) I definitely think they have a solid and supportive relationship.

Robmart

Hope everyone has a wonderful Christmas ♥️

Raiden759

Thanks for the chapter, Seras! Merry Christmas, and Happy Birthday! It's good to be back here, one of the best communities out there.

pat

Happy birthday and enjoy the holiday and all that. Awesome that this has allowed you to spend more time writing, more delicious chapters for us!

David Otis

Happy holidays my favorite author!

Frogsamurai

Have a happy holidays and birthday! Thanks for the glorious Hiromi pov!

DrFuju

Love your work. I like the changed perspective a lot.

reeen

rockerboy BD when?

Eric Hicks

It would be interesting to see Alice's reaction to the "original" work that Motoko "wrote"... smells like teen spirit or let you down... or any of them really.

Mike L

Happy holidays and happy birthday in advanve

NovaBrain

Quick question; when will we see the making of the Initial D BD? Happy holidays and birthday

Seras

Probably when Motoko gets pulled into a racing quest of some sort.

obsidianrandom .

Happy birthday I just had mine too!

David Hoyt

And he hasn’t noticed any of them. I do wonder about the choom that died in the maelstrom attack. Boy or girl?

CentrisAce

Damn it i was hoping it was updated by now!

Seras

Sorry! But I am doing a lot of writing on my little vacation!