Is this thing on? (Patreon)

After trying out that first Scorbunny video, I thought it would be easier if I could record my voice track live as I played, so the movement of the "puppets" actually matched what I was saying better.  Plus, editing footage with synchronous sound is easier in a lot of ways.

Alas, there are several pitfalls.  The first is Sound Quality, which is abysmal.  It is pretty atrocious in its own right, but compared to my standalone audio recorder, the computer mic sounds like complete ass.  I even went and bought a "better" one but it still sounds bad.  I messed with every setting I could find and I don't know what else to do.

The other pitfall is Puppeteering Skill, which presumably I will get better at over time.  How do these kids do it?  I labeled my mistakes in the first segment; see if you can spot the rest.

Maybe I'm being too picky.  Do these segments sound okay to you?  Which one sounds the best?