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Like Bobbie, Gwen wasn't planned, she just happened.

Originally, Becky wasn't going to be hanging out with friends, she was going to be in the change room alone, recognize Scarlett as the girl from the day before, and ask Scarlett if she saw Miles naked when Scarlett was in the men's change-room the other day. But then I decided that Becky was going have this discussion with two friends instead, and then Gwen pushed her way into the story.

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punarotta

Big reveal that lot of people saw Scarlett - because no-one seemed to react to her... Good thing she was focused on mission at hand - lot of that discussion would have been awkward :D Miles' name wasn't mentioned in most pages - maybe only once in reference to him? (he referenced to Scott by name, but Scott never used his name in their discussions...)

Senko

I like her swimsuit very cute but I am confused by the locker room scene. Why did they put on their swimsuits, shower in them then swim? Laying aside the showering before swimming which I understand some places require like you should clean yourself before entering a Japanese Onsen but why in their swimsuits?

Disbet

That's pretty common in public swimming pools in my country. Showering before swimming is required, and showering naked in communal showers is tolerated at best, and only in some places.

RobinHarper

Whoops, you're right! I think the first time Miles' name was mentioned was when Scarlett came up with this plan, well after Miles' first appearance. I should probably go back and add Scott greeting Miles by his name to Miles' first appearance.

Zoe Storm

Oh, we have an explicitly trans girl in the cast now? 👀