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This is the final set of these strips.

*Minor Spoilers!* So the second last strip in this set contains a spoiler about Jess' hidden motivation of why she decided to help Felix out. I've added a "Spoilers Ahead" image just before it in case you'd like to avoid it.

How and when Felix finds out this information in the final version of the comic will be different, probably in some dialogue between Jess and Ashley, but that motivation will remain the same.

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Changing Jess' haircut was a motivator to redo the strips where Jess is at the gym, but it was also a chance to improve this scene.
I'm currently rewriting this scene as I write this caption, and I'm hoping to include this bit of info in the new version...
...but Jess and Felix's conversation was a bit different when Felix takes control, so I have to find a way to steer the dialogue back here.
I'd like to keep this yoga scene, but will probably be just Jess doing stretches on her own at her private gym.
This is another scene that I'll keep, but it'll be a touch different.
With Felix's night in VR with Jess being different, I'll have to change this dialogue.
I made a decision late in writing the comic that it should be taking place in November/December. Jess will have to wear warmer clothes.
Next strip contains spoilers about why Jess is helping Felix!
Jess has a crush on Craig! But then why would she help Felix help Craig date Lisa? The new version is going to handle this better.
I'm keeping the part about Jess staying single because of her job, but I way introduce that info differently.

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MaggieHeels

WOW... this is amazing... ❣️❣️❣️

stevedore

I'm just gonna say that this all looks like it could get very, very complicated. In a glorious way. (And Jess apparently needs to shave her back...)