It’s out of focus! (Patreon)

This is what my retoucher exclaimed when I sent him this photo to edit.  The model is deliberately out of focus as I was focusing on the background - the london skyline with the iconic London eye.  So, the second image is my own edit and the third the monochrome version.  Do me know what you think, please!

ps: I’ve done similar out of focus stuff with Vanessa in Frankfurt, focusing on the panoramic views of the city skyline, but I never sent any for editing, i just kept them to myself ( think 🤔). But this one stood out for me -  sadly, Irida changed posed too quickly so I don’t have an equivalent in focus image to compare.