I'm Rising - New song (Patreon)

HEY all. I was going to wait a day or two to post this, but I'm headed off to a million cons tomorrow and couldn't stand keeping this to myself. Big one if you're a rock person.

What do you think? I think this is my most successfully rock song in a while. Also note the chest punching technique used at the 2:30 mark.

I’m rising

Looking out and I’m finding no solution

Listen round and I find no words to say

Hesitate do I have my own permission

Are my own feet standing in the way

Realize I’m tired of pretending

that we can’t tell where we’re right or wrong

Think I don’t know what I’ve been defending

All I wonder is “What took so long”

Oh let it go (repeat x3)

Chorus:

I’m rising up with my eyes on the horizon

can’t give it up

I’m rising up, and it’s hardly surprising

can’t get enough of the sunshine

like a bird flies

like a satellite

like I’m leavin’ the atmosphere

I’m rising!

C’mon gimme some more (repeat)

Long ago I had this kind of feeling

Like my heart was a burnin’ but it had nowhere to go

Every moment without this rush I’ve been stealin’

Gonna spread this fire so stand back and watch it grow

{oh let it go} x3

Chorus

Feelin’ rounded like an egg man

crawling up my leg man

lookin’ now to take off runnin

faster than a meteor cookin’ up in the ether

my blanket is hydrophobic so you

can’t damp my

spark and it’s electric in fact

we have elected to take it to eleven

elevate it’s my directive gotta rise

{The ground ain’t fallin’, I’m flyin’

I’m high above you} x2

Chorus