Unexpected Gift - sketch of upcoming pic (Patreon)

Hey,

for a few days I was checking other drawing software, my Photoshop is clunky as hell, other porgrams have this awesome line stabilizers. Drawing lineart takes me ages because of my parkinson lines. I think I'll change the program soon...

When it comes for sketch, if you see things I should correct, tell me, you will help me make the final effect even better