Alpha Luna Ch. 5 Page 26 (Scrapped version) (Patreon)
Published:
2016-05-15 00:01:05
Imported:
2023-03
Content
As I mentioned in the previous post I ended up changing the bottom part of this part for the better, This happens when you don't have much of an idea of what you want to convey. The collar shot was redundant and the screaming of Luna trying to survive in the bottom wasn't saying anything new other than "Hey why does she looks human now?!" which I think is better understood in the final version.
Well in any case I hope you like the insight :)
Leo