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WHUPS forgot to update again yesterday? Erika, you monster >:| 

Finished inking the remaining two pages and got all the figures colored. 

It's really unusual for there to be any script editing at this point, but Matt sat down with me and helped me word a bunch of things better. Feeling way better about this script now, before some of the way I'd said things felt a bit *too* much-- and if *I* feel that way about something, you know it's gotta be over the line. 

I really love working with Matt so closely like this. Sitting down thigh to thigh and passing my laptop back and forth as we tweak away at the text. 

People frequently mistake his incredibly poor spelling as a reflection on his intelligence or education and it makes me furious. He's super dyslexic, so his brain is wired differently than most and the way that manifests is that letters all mix and swirl around for him. Even if he runs spellcheck, he can't tell which of the proposed spellings are correct because they all look the same. 

Spelling aside, he's a brilliant writer. He has a natural ability to pair up words into the most excellent of all possible combinations. Nearly every single one of the OJST scripts has at least a touch of his wording in them. 

IN SUMMATION: I think my husband is p. clever. 

Anyway, enjoy these dick sucking pics!

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Anonymous

Would it be possible to see the original script? (I'm just interested in what you consider too much, to be honest.)

OhJoySexToy

A lot of the lines essentially stayed the same, but rather than personal "I" statements, Matt helped turn them into more general "you" ones. For example, originally I wrote "It made MY cunt pound and took MY breath away", which is now "It makes YOUR cunt pound and takes YOUR breath away", a lot of stuff like that :)