February 5, 2013 (Patreon)
Content
But...
The feeling of the comic was "off"
The dialogue felt very awkward and I was having some real trubs imagining the visual flow of the piece.
It was half an educational comic about how to use cock rings and half a review of FOUR different rings he was sent by one company and it just wasn't gelling.
Matt and I just sat down and went through all five pages and have agreed he's gunna re-work the script and narrow it down to a review of just TWO of those rings. Hopefully we can get the page count down to four, fingers crossed.
According to my schedule, I should be penciling today and inking tomorrow, so this is quite a set back. While he's re-working this script, tomorrow I'll start scripting the next comic. It's pretty likely I'll need to use a guest comic on Tuesday, which bums me out because I hate missing my deadlines but on the other hand it's a really great comic that I've wanted to share for a while and I think people will really like it. Pros and Cons!
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