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This Romantic World Page 320 (Patreon)

Published:
2023-09-08 04:22:33
Imported:
2023-09

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I worried that Mandi's dialogue in that bottom left panel felt a little unnatural or overtly expository. I feel like it needed to be there for the sake of pacing though. We're three weeks into this scene now. I think it was time for readers to find out what Mandi's relationship to Vincent was. 

So! Vincent is banging his sister in-law. I hope this scene is keeping your interest, and that you're looking forward to seeing how Switch reacts to all this when the dust settles. 

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Squid Hills

Switch is going to have to make Vincent's death look like an accident, I see.

GregD

I honestly dont get why Switch has allowed things to go this far without any progress on Vincent's part. But as a side note: no, I don't feel like the dialogue is unnecessarily expository. Because it's clear this woman thinks outloud all the time, even when no one else is there. Could also be the reason it was so easy to convince her to do this. Part of her really wanted to be 'bad' in a real way, not a fake way.

Lonestar
>>117066722

I don't know why it's too surprising considering what she let and encouraged Casey to do way back. How different is this to "trapping" her stepfather and wearing him down until he finally gave in. Genders are reversed, but it's basically the same thing. Switch only seemed to be hands-on in the extreme extreme.

Mark Hunter

I don’t think that second to last panel was overly expositional. Considering how verbal and explicit she was when talking aloud about the ‘sin’ of eating an energy bar one hour early, it just seems like a quirk of her personality. I’ve known real people who do the same, almost like they don’t realize when they’re doing it out loud in front of another person.

Anonymous

This is really hot. I love the way she knows it's wrong, keeps saying it aloud but never stops and is clearly getting off on it. Vincent comes off as a jerk and I'm interested in seeing what happens to him as a result but I love the fantasy of corrupting these women.

Malmedee

Oh yeah we've got a properly fucked up MC again! Switch should be eating her own hair over this.

NKL

Looking forward to how Switch handles him.

Chris Davis

Looking forward to seeing more Mandi! Hot, Large-breasted Red Head? Yes, Please!!!