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Published:
2017-03-03 05:36:48
Imported:
2021-02
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The downside of skipping ahead a few months in your story's timeline is that you're going to have to explain just what's been going on in the missing time. Exposition like that can be a tricky thing to write, for me anyway. As it's all too easy to fall into the "As you know, Bob" trap where your characters are standing around spouting information about things they should both already know.
So I did my best to keep things short and to the point with Bria's monologue here. I suppose there's more she could have gone into, like just how she ended up part of her teacher's expanding student harem, but I'm hoping readers would piece together that Casey brought her in to that particular fold. If not I can have her mention it a little later on. Hope you guys like the page! :)