This Romantic World Page 243 (Patreon)
Published:
2022-04-29 02:24:21
Imported:
2022-05
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I thought about putting some more expository dialog in that first panel to remind readers that this is indeed the first time she's had the sensation of somebody blowing inside her, but everything I came up with had the feel of loosely-translated subtitles on a hentai video. You know the kind, where the woman's "dirty talk" reads more like she's just narrating what's happening to her. I figured less was more, and just did my best to express what I wanted with her moan placement and expression up there. Let me know what you think, this scene is close to wrapping up! :)