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So in hindsight, Royce needn't have worried about a video of them screwing ending up on the internet. Bria's dad is still going to find out about what they did tonight no matter what. XD
I've often said that the real reason nobody ever gets pregnant in TRW is because the pacing demands that I keep the passage of time ambiguous. And even if I do track the passage of time, sometimes whole chapters take place within a day or two of each other, so it wouldn't really matter anyway. So what changed? Well, I've reached a point in the writing where I finally have a definitive idea of when the status quo of TRW will be free to get shaken up. It's still a long ways off, but I can start laying the groundwork for big narrative developments now!
As an aside, call me crazy but I feel like hentai has a particular storytelling edge almost exclusive to the medium. Think about it, how often do you find out a character is pregnant before they do? It's kind of impossible, really, barring the presence of a narrator saying "little did she know." It's because of the hentai-specific application of x-ray shots that readers get the big news long before the parents will, and I find that fascinating.
Anyhow, I know I always say I want your input, but that's especially true here. Permanent change is rare in my slice of life storytelling style, so I'd love to hear what you think of my first big one.