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Author’s note: Hey guys

So as announced, starting tomorrow my Administrative Break begins - meaning this is the last chapter of this week and month. I have a lot planned around Lament of the Lost, so hopefully four days will be enough.

There will be some changes, nothing fundamental to the story, but correction of mistakes I made and were pointed out to me, such as the omission of an entire tier/circle for Indomitable Will and other weaves. Another thing I'm considering is reducing the range of the domain. It's a powerful skill and the six current meters of reach seems too much too soon - Hence in today's chapter, it says only three meters, but I'll have to rethink this.

Again, administrative break from 29 June to 2 July - sadly, four days without chapters.


I hope you enjoy this one all the more.


Chapter 81: Beyond the Reaches - link: https://www.patreon.com/posts/107047560


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Chapter 81: Beyond the Reaches


"...and then he asked her for a dance," Alayna Murray, one of the many healers in the barracks infirmary, recounted the events of last night at Drunken Filly. "Can you believe that?"

"Did she agree?" Becca asked, having a hard time believing that one of her colleagues, not even a senior healer, someone who had recently formed his second array, had the balls to flirt with one of the Master Guards. Those guys were in a league of their own, the best of the Castiana City Guards.

"That's the thing. She did, and they danced for hours."

"Wow...do you think they're... you know, that they fell in love?" Becca's friend, Meredith Selit, asked, taking a bite out of a cookie she had bought on her way to work this morning.

"Nah, what matters is whether they end up in bed together." Why their Chief Healer, Lieutenant Marcus, was sitting at the table with them, listening to their conversation was beyond the understanding of all three women. It wasn't about flirting. Everyone knew he was married, and to none other than one of the Master Guards. In fact, Becca couldn’t remember him ever hitting on a woman, even though she herself found it pretty hard to say no to his charming smile. The reason he was allowed to sit there with them, to join in their little chat - silly as it was.

"I don't think so, Lieutenant."

"Oh, come on, Becca, how many times do I have to tell you to just call me Marcus? Besides, why wouldn't it matter? Either way, it's gonna be weird between those two for a while now."

"True, but..."

"MARCUS!"

There was no mistaking that firm voice of authority. Becca could only wish that their Captain didn't shout their Chief Healer's name every time she came into the infirmary. Understandable, though. The man had an uncanny knack for being unfindable when he wanted to be.

"Ah, San, how lovely to see you this early in the morning. Here," Chief Healer raised his voice, cheerful as ever, and waved at her from the table tucked away in the corner of the infirmary along with a sofa and a small kitchen with countless magic tools for those on duty to enjoy a little rest here and there during the day. "Care to join us? We just talked about..."

"Cut the crap, Marcus. I heard enough of bullshit yesterday."

"The party at Egerton Manor?"

"The Spring Labyrinth Ball," she corrected him with enough bitterness to spoil Becca's morning tea. "That greedy bastard kept me there all afternoon."

"Little Egerton? You? And how did he manage to do that? I would have thought that you..."

"Money, Marcus. What else?"

"Ah, he threatened you to cut our budget again?"

"What else?"

"You know he'll find a reason to do it anyway, right?"

"Yeah, but every week without budget cuts counts. One night of pointless parading in front of those stick-up ladies and lords is something I can survive," Captain Rayden sighed, massaging the bridge of her nose, obviously not as unphased by it as she'd like to be. "Anyway, not why I'm here, Marcus. Four bodies were brought in yesterday, right?"

"Uh...Becca? You were the one to take them over, weren't you?" Chief Healer passed the ball to her, making her straighten up. The man might have seemed disinterested in his work, perhaps even bored, but despite that first impression, he had a good grasp of what was going on in the infirmary and the barracks as a whole.

"Yes, sir. I was - around four o'clock in the afternoon, they brought back four bodies, two male, two female. Three males, one female half-Terr'den. She - actually, if I may, ma'am?"

"Go on."

"It's a real shame because she just came to the city, the half-Terr'den woman, I mean. I did her initial check-up only a few hours before, ma'am."

"I see, that's truly... maybe better if you take me to see the bodies first."

"And the reason is?" Chief Healer Marcus asked, as intrigued as Becca and everyone else at the table. It wasn't often that their Captain wanted to go to the morgue in person, let alone for her to appear so unsure of something.

Seeing their looks, Rayden sighed under her breath. "Because I was the one who cleared the half-Terr'den woman for citizenship and as such, have reason to believe that she might still be alive."

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How long has it been? A few minutes? Hours? Or days? The oppressive darkness and eerie silence that reigned in this place made it impossible to tell time. Sure, there was my breath to count and more, but my wandering dark thoughts made it a struggle. Not distracting my mind inevitably meant to think about where I was - in the morgue; at least, that was my hope. No, I wasn't into that kind of stuff; being here, surrounded by corpses, creeped the shit out of me. What scared me evenmore, however, was the possibility of me not seeing daylight again.

If this was a crypt and I couldn't die...

Better not to think about it.

However, when I inevitably did, it didn't make much sense. Why would they put a bunch of thugs and nobodies in such a fancy place? It would be cheaper to bury them or burn them.

Of course, I was glad they didn't - hence my hope. It meant that there was a chance that, at some point, someone would walk through the door I found on the other side of the room to check on the corpses here.

'Maybe I should try opening them again?'

Pointless. I had tried to open them twice now, and they hadn't budged, nor did anyone answer my cries and pounding on them. So here I was, curled up in a ball, Sage pressed against my chest, wings enveloping me in a tight bun, reading the description of [Spatial Domain] for the hundredth time.

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Spatial Domain

General Weave
12 glyphs - ⦿⦿

⦿
You are one with the surrounding space,
and in it, you will not miss a single trace.

⦿⦿
There is more beyond the reaches you claim as your domain,
much to discover and see, though limited and not so plain.
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The description claimed that I should be able to use my perception to see beyond my current domain, beyond the roughly three meters of the space around me where, if I wanted, no detail remained hidden from me. Did I try, though? Bloody heck no! I didn't want to see deeper into this room where the darkness only held more dead bodies. Heck, I avoided looking even at the two on the tables next to me. Why would I when just the thought of them being there gave me the creeps?

Though, despite my best efforts, every now and then my perception wandered further than I would have liked.

'You are one with the surrounding space...' I read for the hundredth time, struggling with the urge to get rid of the weave just so I wouldn't have to face the corpses of those I killed again. Sure, it would be enough not to use my perception. Easy, right? Wrong. Not to see, to be surrounded by utter darkness, at the mercy of what was beyond, was even worse.

'and in it, you will not miss a single trace...'

Maybe I should try to read something else? But then again, I didn't trust myself not to do something stupid, something that I would surely regret later - like getting rid of [Indomitable Will]. What would keep me sane, then? Sage? Its softness was indeed divine, and the smell of apples well covered the stench of the dead around; regrettably, though, the periods of my death by poisoning were too short to bring me some peace, but...THE DOOR HANDLE!

It moved.

Silence.

Did I imagine it?

No. No, someone was at the door - metal rattled in the lock, and then, with a weak creak, the LIGHT cut through the darkness of the morgue.

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Name: Korra Grey

Race: Human
Gender: Female
Age: 27

1st Array: Slave
Master: None
Sigils: 97 -
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Weaves: 1st Array (6/6)

Eleaden Standard Language (General): . . . 19 glyphs - ⦿⦿
Indomitable Will (Slave):
 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 111 glyphs - ⦿⦿⦿⦿⦿
Thrifty Drinker (General):
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .3 glyphs - ⦿
Equilibrium
 (General): . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .7 glyphs - ⦿
Hunger Fortitude (General):
. . . . . . . . . . . .5 → 6 glyphs - ⦿
Spatial Domain (General):
. . . . . . . . . . . . 11 → 12 glyphs - ⦿⦿ 

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Author’s note: A question: Marcus - as you probably know he is an orphan and in the original I orphans with exceptions did not have a surname. I was wondering whether to give them one though. A surname to indicate that they are war orphans.

Although that would bring with it some problems like how to differentiate them from each other - like when someone calls them Lieutenant [Orphan]. Anyway, I was curious what you guys think. Is this stupid and should leave it as it is? Or is it something you're interested in? Cause it would affect Deckard, too.
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Comments

Navaria

Thanks for the chapter! I think giving orphans a surname based off of their first job title could also work as an idea similar to how names like fletcher/smith came about

Nirrvash

Yeah, that might work - based on their weave. On second thought, it might create havoc as to whether I mean their last name or their weave or their actual profession.

Zerith

You are all over and under thinking this. Unless the mother gives birth alone and Then dies Before naming, the kid would have their full name. This is a system setting. "But they don't gain access to the system until they are older." The system is privy to basically all knowledge, it actively gains knowledge from everyone in it. The fact that Korra Grey's name is still Korra Grey in part proves this, I don't think the asshole would have allowed her to choose her own name if he could instead name her "Test-subject, 1234" just to make his records/life a tiny bit easier. Unless I am wrong, her given name was locked in as soon as she, a complete unknown to the system, set foot in it, since the system simply data mined her as soon as she was a part of it. (my head cannon here) Another thing that makes me firmly believe given names are locked in before system activation is the general lack of retarded names: if you had to name YOURSELF at ten(I think) alot of people would name themselves something dumb like "Magma Fist" or name themselves after beasts they like, we would likely see a few "Moss-Bear [Surname]" and worse, we would have a lot of dumb asses stealing a noble's name in full to try and get a better life for themselves. It would just be a dumb system. Instead, the system just has to store trivial data until the user to be becomes a user and then gets their trivial/proper name. Now, you could argue that, rather than store their name for years, the system would instead the unique identifiers of the ones with authority to name the new user then data mine Them for the name data on demand when they come of age, but any usable identifier would be more taxing to store than the original name is. To me, the only logical option is that the child is always 'true named' by their system day, baring them never getting a name. That said, If a child is born and no one with authority to do so names them for Years, Then you get into needing to name them territory, as this occurrence is beyond rare, naming them after their orphanage then works fin as very few of the kids would be given that surname. This is my hot take, anyway. System storing the Name data for a pending user? Someone who, by all odds, has the system primed and ready to go but their access to it is cut off until their age of majority? Trivial for the system.

Nirrvash

I have to say, you took my breath away and I feel stupid for not thinking of this myself. The only possibility I see for an orphan not to have a name is that the system is not activated in an individual until they are 16 years old - they basically don't exist for the system or it could be the period when their true name is formed. So if he was orphaned young and doesn't remember his parents' names/surname and then grows up without it, his real name and the one that gets entered into the system at 16 is just the first name - or the surname he later received. Damn, so awesome, you made me think about it from a completely different angle. So much to think about...