Story Name Part 2
- Lament: Slave's Cry 4
- Lament of Korra: Slave's Cry 8
- Korra's Lament: Cry of a Slave 10
So if I had to go based on poll alone the clear winners were Chronicles of a Beast and Lament of a Slave. However, poll wasn't the only thing helping me make a decision, for the most part it was you guys in the comments. And of course my own ideas about the name, and here I will take the liberty of outlining my idea.
A lot of about that has been said before so I won't repeat it, but my idea was for the cover I'm working on to go hand in hand with the title. The cover for the first ark would have Korra crying and as the story would go on and she became more forthright about what she is, her cries would gradually turn into bestial roar. Tier 3 Patreons know what I'm talking about.
So I'd like to call the first ark, the book if you will, Slave's Cry. Of course, I'm still open to suggestions.
Well, as for the whole title of the story, Lament of a Slave, is kind of at odds with that arc title. And as many of you have pointed out something like Chronicles of a Beast is kind of bland. While technically she is both slave and beast throughout the whole story, is not what the story is about - in broad terms she transforms from being a slave into a dangerous beast. But what remains throughout the story, as some of you have pointed out, is her lament - and it was what made the original title kind of unique - within the bounds of how something can be unique these days. With that said, I came up with a few choices and here they are.
PS: Like mentioned above, feel free to speak your mind - point out that it sounds weird to native English speakers or something.
PS2: Keep in mind that this is the name for the first ark, the following ones would be in the same style up to something like Beast's Roar. At least that's the idea.