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i know Ben doesn't had all that light and explosion, i'd just add it for dramatic effect hehe
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Steel8091

So far... I love it!

The Big_Red_Machine

Hot damn!!! Legit blowing me away with this layout! You got them flowing so nicely I could ready left to right or top to bottom and it's still sweetly displayed and visually legible :D also really awesome job with the plugnitrix lighting, totally captured the feel from the show and I'm even feeling a bit of classic DBZ in it (giving me vibes from the 1st broly movie lol) and the English is good too. No spelling errors and while cum is easier to say, EJACULATE sounds like something femboi gwen would say like just gotta sell how bad his big boys gotta blow XD

libinick

i thought "ejaculate" was more accurated with Gwan being a nerd using longer and "smart" words. thank you for the feedback friend, i really appreciated

The Big_Red_Machine

And you was totally right :D I was just saying it's a nice detail since he would put that much effort into his vocabulary cause he a big dick nerdboi lol