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Soul Collision (Patreon)

Published:
2022-03-25 21:38:49
Imported:
2022-04

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The heel is on the other foot!

Commissioned by a patron.

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stger

Is it intended that the girl has different clohtes while sleeping on panel 5, 6 and 7?

stger
>>80562272

I would prefer that you fix the belly size in CURSED instead of these one, if you would fix something :)

Stormfries

i like transfpormatiuons better but great work

mostwondrousandstrange
>>80562272

I'm quite willing to fix both the belly size and these three images. If I may take a moment of time, what do you see wrong with the three images?

stger
>>80562272

Okay, the incosistency is: Panel 3: Girl has this long black dress, which is on the front and back long. Panel 4: Suddenly the dress is on the back short (propably because you want to show the ass ;) ) Panel 5: The dress is much brighter, more greyish instead of black and it looks like it's shorter on the front. This is propably because the dress is folded up on the legs. Main issue is here only the color. Panel 6: Here we have the same dress on Panel 6. But I just reognized the boobs appear to big. The should be flattened because of gravity ;) Panel 7: This picture gives the impression that both just waked up, but for the girl is the dress missing. I doubt that she took it off while sleeping ;) Maybe this could be easily fixed if you would draw dress just in front of her, on the bed. Then she might have just taken off her dress in a panic when she woke up. Or even mor realstic, the dress is just half taken off, behind her head. But I don't think you have to fix this sequence. None of this things is super dramatic.