When you're trying to stay in the closet but it's becoming ridiculously difficult (Short animatic) (Patreon)

I made this based on a scene from a Chilean TV show with puppets called "31 Minutos", where several characters question another one (supposedly male) about their new appearance x) I did what I could to translate it to English in the subtitles. Please let me know what you think, if the translation is clear/makes sense, and if it's funny or not xDD I mean, in Spanish I think it is, but as a non-native, self-taught English speaker, I'm not sure.

(In the original episode, everyone had their appearance changed through cosmetic surgery, but "Policarpo" was particularly attracting their attention because "he" chose typical feminine traits like big breasts, long hair, etc. x) And it is theorized by fans that "he" may be in fact a transgender woman for a few other signs in other episodes. Sadly, there's not much more info about this.

Anyway, I thought the concept might work fine even without the audio or as a comic x)

 Original scene in case you want to watch it:

https://www.tiktok.com/@lovely...juaninjuanharry/video/7123005911622323461?is_from_webapp=1&sender_device=pc&web_id=7329025533454796293