Gift (For Lynn) [Sketch] (Patreon)

I liked this idea, but now I'm not sure if it's fine x) And this angle/pose is a bit complicated, so I hope it doesn't look that bad! I'll make corrections when cleaning the lineart if I decide to continue with this one (I may discard it and try something different if it doesn't convince me xD) Please let me know what you think! ^^

BTW, thank you all for your kind comments and messages! :D

Lynn's version: