Chapter 5, Page 23... (Patreon)

...Only two pages to go!

The first line of dialogue I carried over from the previous page.  I think it works better here.  Already edited the previous page, so that's all set to go!

I might need to put in a third page, but I may be overthinking it.  I have everything sketched out and I'm very happy with it, but there's a bit of business that I'd like to include that wasn't in the original script.  We shall see,  Either way, it's gonna be fun!

Have a great weekend everyone!