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......While I'm very exciting with where things are going in the story, I noticed I have created what will be a slightly awkward transition.  I'd seen this coming before and thought I had it handled, but I think it will need a bit more work.  I'll press on with the story for now.  Hopefully I can fix the issue later with an extra page or panel.  Or maybe I'm overthinking it?  We shall see. ^^;

I hope everyone is having a great weekend!  Chat soon!

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Brad Kitts

Can't wait to see this bathroom break playout.

Anonymous

Sorry little one. Meg wins this game.

Death of Ink

Love how quick Meg got into mistress mode soon as she learnt she was being legit. Total pro here.

kou32

The puppy dog eyes are dangerous

DuskStealth

Out of luck Ellie. We’ve seen how Meg tricked Sam. You’re gonna be “suffering” a lose.

Fritz Sands

I am sure this will be more win-win than draw.

Silence

They are all so cute!

PulpFiction

I just noticed you're at 598 patrons. Any plans for when you break 600? And you are at 510k page views on DA. I think breaking half a million page views deserves a celebration as well! Shall we get the Champagne out?

Fritz Sands

Val's reaction is great.

Jordan Andrew Scherr

I'm open to chat-rebounding ideas back and fourth if it would help sort the progression. Some outside perspective can help any artist in a rut.

Michael

I love how it's getting to Val that she sort of knows what's going on between them but not the specifics. Her imagination must be running wild about now while she desperately tries to suppress it

PsyGremlin

Who can resist Bambi eyes? I'm assuming the transition you mean is that Val suddenly seems to know what the bet was between them? Not a big problem, you can't have have all the explanatory conversations set out. If you do feel the need to tighten it up, maybe just change Val's text to something like "Did Ellie just ask Meg's permission?"

the_iceman

Meg is pondering what she should do in panel 2... All three are blushing? There may be something in the blush... (Sorry for that bad try at a joke. :D )

Fenix

Game over. So we have bondage now?

Fenix

I wonder what next pages are going to be about. Anyway, I await with anticipation. :)

stereoscopecomics

Wait, WHAT?! I haven’t checked my DevArt numbers for a while! I gotta go check that out! Something special for 600 patrons is a great idea! I’m gonna have to give it some thought. Hmmm...

stereoscopecomics

The transition on the next page will be a time/location jump. Not a huge one, but I’m hoping it works or can be easily fixed. I may be overthinking it, but we see when the next page goes up.

Shrub Jump

Val's blushing, there's a "sweatle" on her face, and she made a "gulp" sound. She sooo wants to be part of this game! :P