A productive weekend!... (Patreon)
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...the plot holes have been filled! The script may need a small touch up or two, but I can now get started on the next page without worry. Next page is gonna be fun too.
The issue that I had was that Val’s arc in this chapter didn’t go anywhere and while there are a few bits involving Val that still might need some reconing, the addition of two new pages will keep things from getting any worse. This chapter has about 12 pages to go. Gonna be fun!
The sketches above are the rejects from the Ellie dream sequence comic. The first one was pretty good, but too similar to the second panel.
Hope you all had a fantastic weekend! Goodnight!