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...the plot holes have been filled! The script may need a small touch up or two, but I can now get started on the next page without worry. Next page is gonna be fun too.

The issue that I had was that Val’s arc in this chapter didn’t go anywhere and while there are a few bits involving Val that still might need some reconing, the addition of two new pages will keep things from getting any worse. This chapter has about 12 pages to go. Gonna be fun!

The sketches above are the rejects from the Ellie dream sequence comic. The first one was pretty good, but too similar to the second panel.

Hope you all had a fantastic weekend! Goodnight!

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kou32

glad to hear things got ironed out, I feel your pain on trying to iron things out and then realize some things had to get pushed back, But glad to hear you found a work around.

Rick

Is this the next strip, I feel as though we missed a part, or is this during the break?

Jordan Andrew Scherr

I'm totally fine with pauses in production if it means a more competent story. Nice thing about patreon, you can go back and re-think some panels for better narrative structure if necessary. But it's sounding like that isn't needed here, more of a course correction.