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...Some get what they pay for.  Some get what they deserve.

The original text was about two pages long and went into detail about what a back stabbing bastard the Count was and more details about his...purchase.  Also more detail about how she shot the blade down his throat, and as he laid there dying, unable to speak, she took off the chains, gathered her belongings and lept gracefully out of the tower window.

Also, yes, there is an a prostitute wearing fake elf ears tied up in the closet. ;)

I initially dropped the text because one, prose are hard, and two, you get to make up your own story for her.

This was a lot of fun.  Expect more!

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Michael

I have to agree, while I do like the sound of your original text somtimes less is more (and yeah, Prose is a bastard to write!)

stereoscopecomics

Yes! Less is more! Exactly the phrase I was looking for. I will say though, it was a great writing exercise. I’ll definitely give it another go.

kou32

This was pretty cool, thanks for sharing and looking forward to the next one ^^

Anonymous

From the way she looks, that last kiss will be so worth it.