Lunch pg 5... (Patreon)
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I'm on the road all weekend (big surprise), so I want to try and get one more page out this week (so long as I don't sacrifice the quality).
Man, this comic has been a challenge. It was originally 14 pages! I had to cut out a lot of interesting conversation. Sadly, as fun as a lot of it was, it didn't serve much purpose. It didn't tell us anything we didn't know about the characters, it didn't teach us anything about bondage or S&M, and most importantly, it didn't move the story forward (it was mostly just me being clever or silly). Sad to cut it all, but I think there are some bits I'll be able to save for later.
Okay, onto the next page!