Lunch 2.5... (Patreon)
Published:
2017-11-03 20:12:41
Imported:
2021-03
Content
...just to shake things up a bit. There's going to be a lot of talking heads in the next four or so pages, and it's been a while since we've seen any bondage in this story.
Not sure how I feel about it, but I think it definitely adds something. Let me know your thoughts.
Also, thanks for all the comments about the dialogue. There's some concern about Meg saying that her job is to make the sub say "Red". A good criticism that will be addressed on the following page. I'll ask you guys about it again when I finish the LUNCH comic. If you still think it might be an issue I'll rework it then.