Friends at a Party pg 4... (Patreon)
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I think I may be a bit of a perfectionist (NO!) as I spent a lot of time on this page, but I'm happy with the results. There are a couple little bits I'd like to...adjust, but looking at it now, It's probably unnecessary.
One thing I do plan to change (as soon as I figure out how) is to remove the Fifty Shades of Gray reference. It's important for the set up and is loosely based on actual events, but it dates the comic. I don't see Fifty Shades disappearing any time soon from the zeitgeist (I think it will always be held up as an example of bad writing and what not to do), but if I can find a way to remove it, I will.
Let me know if I misspelled anything. Onto the next page!