Uzaki-chan // Short Manga Page #06 ( Sketch ) (Patreon)

The plot thickens... 🍆💢

Going HARD with the doodles and little sound effects...!!!

I really like manga that make good of use of elements like these, they give the page a lot of life and dynamism. However when poorly done these can make the page look like a wall full of graffiti; an unintelligible mess.

Here I think I used just enough, at least enough to fill the dead air due to the lack of dialogue.

BTW, it's not a continuity error, Uzaki's skirt was removed off-camera, I just felt that drawing an extra panel with that detail would hinder the flow... ┐(￣ヮ￣)┌