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Ahri animation! Need opinions! (Patreon)

Published:
2022-10-10 20:52:18
Edited:
2022-10-10 20:52:46
Imported:
2022-10

Content

Just needs color correction, but first.

Is the flow correct? The transitions, are they ok? The jump from scene to another, is there any jump that doesnt seem correct? 

Just need criticism on the animation that's all! Please comment below what you think that can be improved.

Files

ah_yee.mov

Comments

LeArcanist

Animation looks smooth and the scene jumping looks fine. I would zoom it out a little though, the FOV seems too near for a POV. Also, will this be the length of the final animation?

Glory_to_God
>>93332000

I wanted to try something super near because I did a Twitter poll and I had 50>% people who watch my animations on a smartphone. I just need to fiish the paizuri animation so 3 plus seconds and maybe something else If I see it fits

caaffeine enjoyer

The flow and transitions are really smooth, I love the overall vibe of this animation! I've only noticed one "lost" frame in 0:57 that appears in transition between cowgirl and bj scene. Other than that I would only love to see it w/ sound and the color correction You mentioned. Great job as always!