Patreon feedback - Round 5 (Patreon)

Edit: Guys - if I don't know I can't fix anything.
If there is ANYTHING I haven't brought up before that needs looking at please let me know otherwise I'm going to move on as if everything I said in the collection poll is completely correct.
Anyone who voted "Yes, though that's not everything" and "You're getting there, but you're still missing something" do let me know what you feel is missing.
Again I don't know what's missing unless someone points it out. Do not feel afraid to say what you think needs changing.

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Now we're getting onto territories I'm kinda not sure what I'm doing wrong or what I'm missing.

As some of you pointed out in the first collection round, I'm nearly there with it but it's not everything. Can you guys be more specific with what I'm missing? I want to know what I can improve on.

I know this is usually a trend where people would rather vote on polls than make comments but in this one instance if I don't know what it is I can't make a poll about it so please let me know what you think is missing. If you don't comment I'm going to assume everything I've listed so far is fine.