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Colin's Last Stand, Episode 1: The Mysterious Third Amendment (Patreon)

Published:
2017-04-03 17:10:37
Edited:
2018-03-17 07:27:40
Imported:
2022-01

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For you to enjoy!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zC3x-7UIckw&ab_channel=Colin%27sLastStand

Take care, -Colin

Comments

Anonymous

Great job, really enjoyed the first episode.

Anonymous

Just finished this episode during my ride on my bike trainer. Very interesting, and thought provoking. Keep up the good work!

Anonymous

Great job, Colin! Very informative!

Anonymous

Enjoyed it brother

Anonymous

Well done Colin. Very good watch and clearly you enjoyed making it 👍

Anonymous

awesome first episode. just finished it. super informative. any criticism i have for it i know will be worked out with time. keep em comin bro! awesome ways to spend a little chunk of the day

Anonymous

Hey Colin, I'm sitting at work patiently awaiting the release of the video and then I see the title. I think, wait, what, his first video is about the 3rd amendment, why, he picked something so random to start, let's see how this goes. I quickly became enthralled in the topic. The way you presented the information orally, with quotes and the supplemental images captured my attention and made it interesting. I share all of this because I believe I am an example of the impact and the vision you hope to achieve with Colin's Last Stand. You got me into politics at Kinda Funny. I now believe you will get me into history with Colin's Last Stand. Thank you for all the hard work and I can't wait to see what's to come.

Anonymous

Super interesting Colin. Great job

Christopher Lee

Great stuff! So ultimately does this tap into the over stepping of our government in terms of the patriot act and all the stuff revealed by Snowden?

Anonymous

Great 1st episode Colin!

Anonymous

Good job Colin. Really interesting and informative video. You're onto something really special here and I'm excited to be a part of the journey. Keep it up!

Owen

Love that the work you put into Colin Was Right lead to this being such a clean first episode. Great script, and very interesting topic. I will say I don't really care for the background music while you're talking. Not sure if I would prefer silence or just another track though. Makes me think of an 80s movie or something I dunno.

Anonymous

Love the music, and agree with Owen above... maybe don't need the music the whole time but I love the intro and outro

Anonymous

Great first episode. Looking forward to watching it again. My only criticism at the moment is that I thought the music playing throughout was slightly distracting for me. Other than that, the content was great and can't wait for more!

Anonymous

This is an amazing video. Worth my pledge and more.

Anonymous

Great video Colin, I already cannot wait until Thursday. As usual great delivery and writing, I think the music is clashing a little with the message, as I think it's a little too soothing and sounds a little bit like an infomercial.

Andrew

Nice!

Anonymous

Congrats on the first episode! I enjoyed it a lot and it was very informative. My one criticism is that it was a lot of dates and numbers and I feel like it will come off as a little dry to some. That being said, you've got a great foundation here. Can't wait for the next episode!

Anonymous

Really well done man. The topic was great in that it's one that is so rarely covered. The flow and content was superb. Critiques: -when showing quotes, maybe highlight the important phrases. Something to pull the readers attention to the real meat of the message -placement of the prompter. It's a little disengaging when you look slightly off to the side and it becomes obvious you're reading from a script. That's it! Loved the video and can't wait for the next one!

Amy Gilroy

Just finished watching it. Found it very interesting and informative. Although I learnt US history in school, it only touched on the constitutions amendments rather than get into the specifics for each in detail. Thank you for making this and I'm looking forward to your next vid 🙂💜

Anonymous
>>4536968

Maybe a good idea would be to have a little graphic timeline at the bottom of video? Like every time Colin mentions a date of relevance we see a little date stamp?

Anonymous

Just purchased The Creation of the American Republic. I trust you and actually want to expand my knowledge of this huge country I live and the past surrounding it. Colin that was a great step we all got to take together, it's been an honor to come with you. I will always have your back on this journey. Beyond.

Bryan Finck

Very cool Colin, great first video, hope you feel a little less pressure now that the first one is out of the way. Keep up the great work, intro music is great too!

Anonymous

Great work Colin loved it. Loved the music I think Ramon and the band did some good work. All I will say is if you have the song playing in the background for the whole video maybe have the volume just a tiny little bit lower. That's the only thing a can nitpick. Other then that Loved it 👍

Michael Steinmetz

Excellent. My criticism is on your quotes. Some of them start very far over to the right. I assume this is because you took an excerpt from a book but left out the preceeding sentence. It makes it hard to follow since we are trained to naturally start at the top left when we read. Two possible solutions: 1. Type up the quotes instead of snagging them from Kindle/website/whatever. This also would fix any font dissimilarity/display issues among the quotes. 2. Have the entire quote from the book, but highlight the part you want us to read. Lastly, some of the charts were a lot to take in with little explanation. Maybe a quick word or highlight the pertinent data. Keep up the good work!!

Anonymous

This video was pure racist. You didn't even include any woman! :P Awesome job Col! Looking forward to more :D

Anonymous

Fantastic first episode! I love the backdrop you chose for the videos-books and booze, the two things a cultured man needs!

BettyAnn Moriarty

Loved it! I hate to admit it, but I'm not sure I even knew what the third amendment was until today. Horrifying, I know. 🙄 But that's why I'm so looking forward to learning along with you... 👍🏻👏🏻

Gavin Todd

Loved the video, really interesting topic, especially, as a law graduate, the idea of the third amendment in modern cases. I don't wanna be the nitpicking asshole, but since this is about knowledge I feel this is a valid learning point for everyone. Technically (as I understand it), British Prime Ministers, such as William Pitt (the Younger, is who you were referencing I think?), are not Head of State, they're only Head of Government. The Monarch is Head of State. This in contrast to the US, for example, where the President is Head of State and Government. The More You Know! (TM) Really looking forward to everything to come!

Anonymous

Excellent! Exactly was I wanted from you :) Feedback: you should use the "So let's jump in" as you catch phrase for your main subject in every episode, it fit well. Also maybe have a little transition on it, it would help feed into the main material.

Brad Russell [Toukz]

Great first episode Colin. Everything looks great, love the branding and the music. Keep up the good work. ~Brad

Anonymous

Really enjoyed. Great production value and interesting topic. You talked a little too fast and it was hard to keep up with all the facts :) I know you are excited, but slow it down for us slow folks.

Anonymous

Great job Colin! I wouldn't have been able to tell you what the 3rd amendment was, if my life depended on it, before today. Thank you for sharing your knowledge and making me a little less dumb :) I can't wait to see what's next!

Anonymous

Solid work and I'm looking forward to future episodes. Editing was a tad rough and you could have used some more takes a couple times, but the speaking is on point, subject matter well researched... Very happy with this. I'm sure the editing will improve as you get some practice, move into a new place, etc.

Michael Morris

Exactly what I was hoping for, the cadence, quips and cut out videos (jimquisition style) was awesome. The background music adds a lot. The product quality is way better the you lead is to believe, please don't discredit you ability to put together an awesome looking show. The hard cuts are a bit jarring but really don't take you out of it, it would be difficult to do that long of and episode in one take. Can't wait for what's to come.

Anonymous

Great video on a fascinating topic. Thanks for doing this. I'd suggest speaking slower next time, and adjusting the intro and outro music volume levels to better match the speaking audio. Looking forward to the next one!

Anonymous

Great Stuff I was really hoping for something like colin was right but for history. Did not disappoint. 10/10 would support the patreon again

Kevin Dunkel

I was extremely interested in this topic, and then I got really distracted by the background with the CLS looping. I could tell when it was looped because it would stutter right before it looped. It really pulled me out of the video. I'll continue to watch this because you have very interesting subjects and are very good at articulating it to us but please fix the loop problem. Thank you for the content!

Anonymous

Great work Colin. I have a feeling the historical episodes will be a nice breather from the modern political episodes (which I cannot wait for). Great work so happy I am able to support you in this journey.

Justis Salazar

This was so good! Even though the episode focused heavily on the past, it provoked thought at the end when you explained recent cases that had used the 3rd amendment. Could we somehow update the amendment to include domestic policing agencies?

Anonymous

I can't find my name in the credits 😔

Anonymous

Thank you again Colin. Can't wait for what's next!

Dan Phillips

Nicely done Colin. I'm going to learn so much from these videos. I love history, but don't have the time I used to to read the things I want to read (work and kids). These bite sized videos are perfect for me to brush up on my knowledge. Keep em coming.

Chad Lewis

absolutely fantastic.

Scott Miller

Thought this was a great first episode. The only suggestion I have is that I kept waiting for some kind of modern day connection. You made the relevance clear at the end, but I think it would have been more effective to establish a general thesis about the third amendment's relevance today at the beginning, before diving into the history. I think that would have given the audience a hook to keep them invested throughout the explanation. Still, I thought it was excellent, and I look forward to episode two. BTW.. I'm a history teacher, and I will be starting at a new school teaching in New York next year. Maybe I will be able to use some of these videos in my classes.

Anonymous

Great job! I love that you source all your information. Things that I personally didn't like (so take this with a grain of salt and piss on said salt if you like) are the background music and your speed on delivery. The music is great for an intro and outro, but it's distracting when you are talking. I want to listen to your words not the music. I would try to slow it down a little in the middle of your sentences. You start them slow and end them slow, but in the middle it seems fast. All in all though great job on your first episode. Looking forward to more.

Anonymous

Definitely informative and dense with information. I now know what the 3rd amendment is (after forgetting from grade school) and the history of how it was conceived. Despite the amount of content gathered, I personally was only able to absorb like 50% of the mini-lecture. I had trouble focusing on your message due to distractions from the background, tone of your voice and imagery. As you were speaking, my eyes wandered to the background and your voice faded away as I was glancing around at your stuff in the back. When I did try to listen to your message I often found myself lost due to the speed and lack of emphasis of message delivery. Also, the images you brought forth with quotes or dense wording made me wonder across the image analysing what was written while I simultaneously listening to you which resulted in partially hearing what you said. In the end I was thoroughly intrigued by the amount of solid knowledge you presented to us and I am definitely going to watch it again to obtain the whole history. I hope this is the kind of feedback you asked for and that it was helpful in any way. Thank you for your time.

Christopher Moore

Great start. Not what I was expecting for the first video but I really enjoyed it. Thought provoking and informative. It is definitely apparent that this is your passion and where you belong. Keep up the good work Colin, I'm looking forward to seeing the next episode!

Anonymous

Colin... Thank you so much. I majored in History and Education, but have since been working in a different field. This Video series is just what I needed to reinvigorate my love of history and thirst for knowledge. In this weeks topic I was most intrigued to think about the philosophical foundations of the 3rd amendment. The citizenry in essence is empowered to keep the military in check via representatives. Thinking back to Pitt' s quote it seems the King of England may not enter out homes, but rain, wind, snow, AND the NSA may. This troubles me greatly. Very thought provoking topic. Already looking forward to next week! Peace

Codename Trigger Thumb

What a very strange amendment. I enjoyed the history of it, and was left questioning just what exact purpose it serves in 2017.

Anonymous

Woohoo! That was great. Audio sounds perfect and video looks great. I find the graphic design work a little outside of the feeling of the show. The blue is a little too distracting to be that much of the screen. I would go with a white personally, a la John Oliver. I also think the logo itself is too big in the sidebar/background. Oliver's (which is a big inspiration to the look of the show) is a light grey on the white and much smaller. It's a visual texture more than made to look at the logo. Hope this helps! The content was awesome and so is that bangin' song. Keep up the good work!

Anonymous

Awesome job here. I like that you pull the camera in closer - much more intimate than Colin Was Right. I love the music and the graphics. And of course, the content was interesting, well-researched, and new. Thanks more making it. I can't wait to see what else you've got in store for CLS. Particularly looking forward to the prospect of a weekly podcast, but you just move forward at a pace that is comfortable. I'm proud to be one of your supporters.

Anonymous

Absolutely fantastic Colin, if this is what Colin's Last Stand is going to be I'm super happy about it. One of the best things about it is all the information in the description. US Revolution has been interesting me lately, I'd love to see a video for each amendment in the bill of rights

Chris Eboli

Colin - I loved the first video and am excited to continue to support you with this new endeavor moving forward. Just a bit of constructive criticism; the information is so dense that it can be difficult to follow with how quickly you're speaking. I understand the 'want' to keep the episodes a certain length, but I had difficulty digesting everything that you were saying without stopping and rewinding the video. This may just be me and the manner in which I learn, but thought I would pass along to you. Again, congrats and best wishes from someone who you can count on to support you moving forward

Hugo's Desk

Congrats Colin, You Tube really lacks serious channels like yours. The research and detail of your video is, in my view, a new benchmark for You Tube videos. Thanks so much. Keep going.

Anonymous

Awesome video! Love the theme music hahaha. Did you write/compose it yourself?

Anonymous

Every bit as interesting as I hoped. Nice job, Colin!

Anonymous

Great job Colin. Exactly what I wanted the videos to be. Keep up the good work and have a beer. You did good

Caleb Greer

I enjoyed it and am looking forward to the political video!

Anonymous

The background music was a little loud. I found my foot tapping to the beat instead of listening to the video. Great lesson over all. Thank you.

Anonymous

I'm not sure how much I agree that its not relevant today. What would those same people think about the CIA, NSA, and various other government teams that assist and work with our Military of today. Personally I'd argue that they would get grouped in with the Founding Fathers concepts of what the term "Military" meant. Especially when considering the military usurping civil liberty.

Anonymous

Great first episode Colin! Love the history stuff. Can't wait to see what you do for the politics episodes.

Stigma

I liked the video. Great job! I had no illusion that the focus of the content wouldn't be on "american" history and politics, but as a Canadian, it was a little less applicable to me. Still interesting though!

Anonymous

Excellent episode Colin! I seen a YouTube comment mention this, but I wanted to reiterate it here. I would love to see a video on Canada-US relations, or maybe on the war of 1812. As a Canadian I feel like it's an extremely important part of our history, and there's a lot of interesting stories from that war. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us.

Anonymous

Awesome video man. You're a great dude and a great role model. Can't wait to see more!

Anonymous
>>4537768

I also think, as he continues, that this will get more figured out. I think that video 50 will be interesting to compare to this first episode. I also think there are things that Colin says aloud that can be told visually instead (like, who certain people are...and maybe some other annotations). It takes more time in the video to add that stuff...but it helps to trim some fat. But I loved the content. I really like learning about American history from the late 1700s, and this was something that I hadn't specifically looked into before.

Justin O'Reilly

Great first episode, Colin! Since it hasn't been precisely defined, is it at all possible for the 3rd amendment to be extrapolated out to help define things like our right to privacy - on the internet or otherwise?

Anonymous

1st episode is spot on Colin, found it very interesting and felt your use of images and supporting video clips made it feel more visually engaging. Worth my investment and I look forward to comes down the line. Watched the final GOG and then the first CLS back to back. It feels right. Keep up the awesome work Colin. ✌

Anonymous

Enjoyed the first episode very much, as a canadian I've never been made aware of the third amendment and that was an interesting starting point. I look forward to the next episode. I did want to say however that my name was miss spelt in the producer credits, not to big of a deal but I wanted to know if anyone else has noticed this with themselves and if we'd be able to get this corrected for future episodes. I understand the list is long and you're only one man. I look forward to the next episode thanks Colin

Anonymous

Great first episode! A little constructive feedback from one history teacher to another. 1.) Topic was interesting, but i feel like it could of used an essential question (why should i care about this subject) 2.) Deeper connection to present day (obviously a little hard with this topic) 3.) Slow it down just a little, i studied this time period so i was keeping up, but i can imagine many people getting lost in how dense the topic is. Great first show, happy to support you, can't wait for the next one!

Anonymous
>>4538515

Doubtful unless 5 of 9 SCOTUS judges somehow believe or interpret government agents spying on your internet usage as "soldiers". You certainly would not get a conservative judge to agree with that broad of an interpretation of the 3rd amendment but with a liberal who knows they will read just about anything into the Constitution that they need to get the outcome that their heart wants.

Anonymous

I wonder if this amendment is relevant to the lawless spying of US Citizens going on today. Seems like it could be pertinent.

Anonymous

Great job Colin. Also well done with the editing. I've heard you joke about how bad you are at it, but this was a fine video. I'm proud of you. My $10 patreon contribution was well worth it. If I can make a suggestion... I like these educational type vids but I'd like to see some open discussion non-scripted type content as well. Maybe just an hour long weekly podcast where you talk about your upcoming projects and we can hear your opinions on different current events. Maybe bring in guests to interview once in a while. Maybe do a Q n A segment. Either way, this is a great start. Keep up the great work!

Anonymous

I loved the first episode. I was familiar with the Amendment, but enjoyed seeing it discussed in further detail as you rarely see it discussed at all. :) A couple of things (as you've asked for feedback): I would make it a little less scripted, less 'reading off the cards' so to speak. And I'd slow down a little bit. Us Newfies are speedy talkers, so I could keep up. But I can see how others might lose details in the effort. Can't wait for the second episode!

Anonymous

Loved the episode, but can the blue background screen be static instead of moving? It was a bit distracting especially when you showed text quotes

JayLou83

Another great episode of Colin Was Right, I'm glad you focused on the 3rd Assassin's Creed. In all seriousness, This first episode of CLS is enjoyable and I learned a great deal. Keep on repping LI and teaching us more.

Andrew

Hey Colin, I posted this on the youtube comment section but I thought I'd post it here as well in case you don't see it there; Loved the content Colin. I have an idea, maybe for a patreon tier or just a bonus for your supporters. I think it'd be cool if you uploaded your actual script for people to download, read over themselves after the video and I think you could include your sources (bibliography) in that as well, instead of just having it below the video. Maybe in a google doc or something? I'm so excited for CLS. This is exactly what I thought it would be so far.

Anonymous

Great 1st episode Colin!

Ryan Forden

Excellent video man. Exactly what I was hoping for in this type of video. Educational and well thought out, presented in an easy to understand format. Looking forward to keeping myself more educated. Excited to see the second type of video later in the week. At this time almost 26,000 views. Congrats! I hope people enjoy it as much as i did. Patreon support well justified.

Jeremy Meyer

26,000 people, in 4 hours, mind you, watching a video about the third amendment is a special kind of beautiful thing.

Ryan Forden

I didn't even think of it that way Jeremy M! Pretty amazing.

Ryan Forden
>>4539351

That's a great idea, I would love to be able to read it and help to digest it better.

Anonymous

COLIN! i also commented on youtube. I'm stoked for you. awesome work! build a studio!

R Bamb

Constructive feedback: the way you present some if the "straight out of the book" facts came off a bit dry. The moments, particularly in the second half, where you were giving your kind of take and feelings on the matter were the most entertaining. They had a more personal and conversational feel to them. You absolutely should give authors/historians like Wood their due, but maybe try delivering it in a more streamlined, paraphrased sort of way, but keep the bibliography available for inquiring individuals. All in all, though, top notch info! Very interesting stuff, I can't wait to learn more!

Edward Postalwaite

Great first episode learned a lot keep em coming.

Anonymous

Awesome premiere episode Colin, very informative with a good range of different sources and other reading to check out. Not a subject I would ever expect to watch a 17 min video on, but it flew by. As others have suggested, it would be great to offer your script to download, my only other suggestion would be to maybe try and give some more off script anecdotes or option to blend in, but that's all. Generally this is exactly what I want and can't wait for more episodes! 👊

Anonymous

Fantastic first episode Colin! Noticed you said on GoG that you may need a researcher at some point. As a fellow history lover I would love to help out in any way. Message me on Patreon and I'll give you my contact information.

Jeremy Meyer

Feedback-wise, just read more plays and screenplays. Your favorite dialogue writers. Epic monologues. Transcripts of stand-up specials. Presidential speeches. Writing for the screen is a special muscle. Take a look at what Aaron Sorkin looks like on the page. Read his stuff aloud. A David Mamet monologue. Read it to Lola. You'll borrow the best writing tricks from the things you like, and elevate your unique style to dominate the format. One of the very best parts of CLS will be watching your scripted content find its natural voice. Five years, you'll be kicking John Oliver's ass. Up and down the playground.

Jeremy Echols

Great job, man. I definitely feel like I learned something. So, feedback: felt like it was pretty dry and dense. Maybe it's just that I watched it pre-coffee, but I found myself losing focus throughout. Maybe pepper some more jokes/present-day examples throughout. Also, you're like a rapper or Ricky Bobby with your hands - EVERYTHING gets emphasis. Maybe having a table in front of you or even holding something (like a book or a stress ball) would minimize movement to the most necessary points. Like I said, definitely learned about a topic I didn't know anything about. Thought you might have come out swinging with something more applicable to current day (ie, like that 2017 USA vs 1930s Weimar Republic topic you keep hinting at) - I think those topics are more likely to get your videos reposted on folks Facebook walls and help grow your following. I was gonna share it (still might) but I was thinking, "I really wish he'd historically taken on Trump/SJWs/whoever" bc that would be more relevant to the people that follow me on Facebook than the Third Amendment. But, feedback and nitpicks aside, thanks for the history lesson, Professor Moriarty! Looking forward to episode 2!

Misty

Promised and delivered.

Karlos Rey

Throughly enjoyed this. Thanks Colin, you have captured my attention once again, like I knew you would.

Anonymous

Does anyone recall the name of the Andrew Jackson book Colin recommended way back in the day?

Anonymous

Congrats on a very successful first episode!!

Ben Blaney

So glad to hear some thoughts on this! Can't wait for more videos!!

Anonymous

That was a great episode. I am extremely glad to be a supporter. I've been with you since the early beyond days. This episode got me curious on an amendment that I had forgotten​ about. I enjoy your approach to teaching/explaining subjects...Always have. I only have one piece of feedback really and I see a few people with it as well. You do speak a bit too fast at some points. I watched the video twice so that the video was fully able to sink in. I thought the music was great and not overbearing or distracting. I have no doubt that these videos will only get better but this was a great first video. Keep up the great work. Ya boy, Dan F.

Stephen J Seidler

Excellent first episode! The minutiae is always what I've enjoyed about history; how some obscure events lead to far more famous laws or actions we now take for granted. The influence of the 3rd Amendment, as well as our American tradition of individual rights, is probably one reason that the military has Article 88 prohibitions against undermining the President or other elected officials. This is why America is not susceptible to military coups. Interesting stuff...can't wait for more!

Jake Watson

Great episode. With Wood's interpretation of the 3rd amendment being that the government shouldn't be in your shit and that the citizens privacy is sacred I was expecting you to bring it home by saying that the NSA is in breach of the 3rd. Is the government being in your home digitally the same thing as physically?

Spytle

Interesting takeaway, James Watson. Had to think it through but my gut says that would be a leap. I think the spirit of it is physically there. Surveillance feels different to me and covered elsewhere. And does the amendment cover groups beyond the military? NSA isn't technically. Anyway, interesting thought, so I'm still thinking. :)

Anonymous

Just a suggestion: What if you put this on podcast services similarly to podcasts like We Have Concerns? I feel like you're delivery doesn't necessarily rely heavily on the graphics but more so on the quotes. I think it would be a great way to give yourself more of a spread across platforms. Loved the episode! Keep it up!

Anonymous

Great first episode. Also something to note is that the Third Amendment is one of the only rights written in the Bill of Rights that has not been incorporated onto the States. The Seventh Amendment right to a jury trial in civil suits and the Fifth Amendment right to a grand jury indictment being the only other two I can think of. Although I imagine if the quartering of soldiers by a State ever occurred the Supreme Court would be quick to incorporate the Third Amendment onto the States. The Slaughterhouses cases and the slow process of incorporating the Bill of Rights onto the States was a very interesting time in our history.

Reythan

Great first episode!! Really enjoyed learning. A couple of suggestions from someone with very little history background... 1) Slow down the delivery on different facts. It was hard for me to keep up with who was who and who you were quoting. 2) End with a summary timeline graphic showing important dates+facts.

Anonymous

Colin, loved the first episode! Very engaging and informative. This is going to be a weekly staple in my YouTube viewing and I'm very happy to be able to support you on Patreon. I do have one suggestion; the scrolling logo during quotes and pictures is very distracting. It may be just me but I just wanted to give you feedback. Love what you're doing and keep up the great work!

Anonymous

Amazing first episode! As a non-us citizen I don't really know much about the history of the country. You were very easy to understand and you did a great job of presenting the information. I Cannot wait for the next. Keep up the good work Colin.

Anonymous

Thanks for this Colin. Although I'm sad I won't get to hear your opinions​on games anymore. (Colin was right and the megaman videos are some of my favourite kinda funny content) I have always, as an Aussie, enjoyed hearing US history and politics talked about by someone who knows what is going on.

Anonymous

I have been following your work for around 7 years now Colin and never reached out before but wanted to just say well done and I am happy to be able to lend my support to this new endeavor. This video was a great start and while there are a few little things that could use work the content and direction are exactly what I was hoping for. I look forward to coming videos and seeing your passion having this outlet.

Anonymous

LOL. Forgot the release date, and it found me playing CIV. Matches perfectly. <a href="https://puu.sh/v8ptZ/7a9f53bb35.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://puu.sh/v8ptZ/7a9f53bb35.jpg</a> Keep them coming, I loved it.

Anonymous

Colin this was super informative, but I'm already missing your ad lib humor. Have you thought about having guests on to supplement? I feel like your personality is a little wasted just doing the teleprompter thing.

Damian Castillo

I think your first episode was great. Informative but not long winded. Adding guest in the future can extend the discussion but this may not be what your trying to accomplish here if I understood you correctly on the GameOverGreggy show.

Anonymous

Loved it! But a couple things. 1) The editing was good. The more time you spend in Premiere the better you'll get. I've been editing TV for 10 years and I still learn every day. It can be as much about technical proficiency as gut instinct. Which leads me to my second point. 2) Let things marinate. Some people noticed and I'd agree that you were moving at a quick pace at times. And it would be nice to just give things a "beat" and let your point sit. But ultimately the more you do the better you'll get and you'll start understanding the rhythm​. 3) The background is a bit distracting. What I love about Rubin's set is there's detail without it being busy. Way to go! Super happy how it turned out, and you should too​ :-)

Anonymous
>>4541638

I really like the idea of a timeline graphic, but the graphic has to be a white board and dry erase marker...

Anonymous

Loved the first episode!! Only suggestion would be to put the CLS logo on the video thumbnail, I had trouble finding the video on my subscription page. Keep up the great work!

Kc Wright

Such a great video ur passion bleeds through the entire video so glad ur doing what you love i was never into politics and only into ancient history but ur passion and enthusiasm makes me want to learn more about both

Ryan Berry

Liked the format, but tbh reviewing what many feel to be a meaningless topic in episode 1 could have probably been a stronger start. Caveat: I don't expect the perpetually offended to be here, but I'm just providing my own honest, opinionated feedback.

Shawn Cassidy

I loved the first episode! I also agree with a few of the points others have made throughout the comments; the delivery felt a little fast (I'd enjoy your thoughts more if they sat for a beat), the background gets a little distracting at times, and sitting at a table would add to the set and might help with the delivery. I'm sure a lot of that will come with time and once you make more of a "studio" in LA. Keep up the great work!!!

Shawn Cassidy

P.S. I love the Seinfeld clip :)

Anonymous

If this was a taste of things to come, I want all seven courses. To be honest I lost my mother yesterday. Your video helped me to take a step away from that for a short time. And learned something in the process. Thank you Colin.

Anonymous

Great episode Colin! I think the content was really great and the inclusion of citations and book suggestions are perfect for this kind of content. My only real negative about the first episode is I found the scrolling CLS on the left side a bit distracting. I am not totally sure if that is because it wasn't moving smoothly (I noticed a slight jitter) or just the movement itself was distracting. It might be worth testing out a static side panel, or increasing the frame rate of the panel to decrease the jitter. Overall though great work! Keep it coming!

Jason Wellband

Loved it! My only less than 100% positive thoughts were the lighting and the volume between you and your music. The credits music made me reach for the volume control quick. But for those little things to be my only comments mean you did a great job! Keep it up!

Anonymous

Great job, Colin. As a lawyer, I was happy to see Griswald get some airtime. A very important case in American legal jurisprudence. Only complaint? Your lack of an Oxford comma here: "Written, Produced and Edited by Colin Moriarty." Can't wait for the next one...

Anonymous

Fantastic Colin! Cheers and well done. Enjoy that bourbon tonight, you earned it for sure. My one critique (only cause you asked) punch up your wit more. The moments you had in there were a nice juxtaposition to the academic rigor of your materials, and made it your presentation. We're all here to listen to history via Colin, don't be shy about being more of that. That said, if each one is like this I'll gladly and eagerly watch thru them all.

Anonymous

Killed it man, I loved it.

Anonymous

Excellent! Thank you Colin

Anonymous

Love it !!!

Anonymous

Great work, Colin. I enjoyed the video quite a lot. And I learned things I did not know. Thank you!

Ian Andrews

Great work. I am glad your uncovering of the history of personal freedom led you to Britain. Excellent subject and excellent presentation. Can't wait for more.

Anonymous

This content is very different in both tone and subject to what people "subscribed to you" for over the years. Focus on spreading the word, because I think the initial support will drop off as your KF/IGN fans realize this content might not be for them. Much love, brother. Keep on standing!

Eric Iverson

You did a great job, Colin. I loved the topic. I was expecting something topical, maybe relating to current events, or a topic more grandiose, and I absolutely love that you chose an obscure topic like the third amendment. As someone who's historical knowledge can tread some water, I'm glad to learn something new... not a rehash of things I already know. I have a feeling I am quickly going to come to anticipate Monday's history lessons :) Keep it up!

Anonymous

I'm gonna have to watch this 4-5 more times to fully take this all in cause there was so much info. in 17 minutes haha. Can't wait for Thursday episode!

Anonymous

Eduver, you aren't kidding. Excellent job Colin. I am extremely pleased by the video and overwhelming satisfied with my decision to support this effort. It just reaffirmed what I believe all along.

Anonymous

Hey Colin - great first video. I know you wanted some feedback, and the only thing I had trouble with was the assumption that the viewer knew what some of the other amendments were; I'm from the UK and have a vague understanding of some of the amendments, but not their numberings, so referring to them as 'The right to...' rather than the 1st, 2nd, 5th etc would have been helpful. Keep up the great work, C-Mo

Anonymous

I don't think the material presented was too dense or presented too fast - that can be solved with multiple viewings. One think that could make it more engaging would be to introduce the relevance to our modern day earlier in the video. I have a hard time criticizing (I'm just a dude watching videos), but having the recent cases dealing the the Third Amendment presented earlier would make me care about the Amendment itself as you talk about it. However, like I said - multiple viewings help out. Thank you for the great video.

GentleFan

Good first video. My only comment, and this is probably pedantic, is that I don't think you need to say "quote, unquote" every time especially since you have the text of the quote onscreen. With the amount of quotes you're using, which I think is good, hearing it so many times in a single video got a bit repetitive.

Anonymous

To offer some constructive criticism, I felt like I would have much rather read the content of the video in the form of an essay, than watched it on YouTube. While I think the content of the "essay" was brilliant, I think you would get a lot more engagement from your audience if you adapted your delivery to better suit its medium. When I watch a video, I want to feel like the speaker is speaking directly to me. Ask yourself this.... if a friend came to you and said, "I heard you have some interesting thoughts about the third amendment, can you tell me about it?" Would you use the same words, sentence structure, and expressions that you used in the video, or would you use more straight-forward constructs, words, and expressions (not to dumb-down the content, but just because the more sophisticated constructs simply feel out of place in normal conversation). I think if you err on the side of more straight-forward speaking, where it feels like you are engaging the audience in genuine conversation rather than just preparing a term paper and then reading it to them, you will have much greater long-term success and engagement.

Fantastic Mr Scott

The Pride of Long Island is back! Just finished watching the first episode and I am impressed with the level of love and care you put into this video! I really enjoyed it. I can tell this is clearly what you are meant to do at the moment. It's only been the last few years or so that I have found an interest in history and politics. The later over the last year. The constitution and amendments were something that I hoped you would go into in this show some, because I don't know much about them except for common knowledge. The video was very educational! I also know you are asking for feedback so I'm going to be as honest as possible. This is a fantastic first episode, but I think the biggest issue isn't with the content, but the delivery. Know, probably 80% of this will be fixed over time. Once things become normal and you get into a rhythm, the delivery will be more natural, but at the moment, it seems a bit robotic. You can tell you are reading off a teleprompter. Try to relax more and convey the message more naturally, as if you are explaining the subject to someone sitting in front of you. Maybe you could use who ever is operating the camera for this. Explain the subject to them and even allow them to ask questions about it maybe. Don't be afraid of goofs and being silly either. Biggest note, the more natural the better and more engaging. I would also slow the pacing down a bit. I followed a good 75% of the content, but there were a few times where I had to go back because I was overwhelmed by your knowledge. Also, don't be afraid of jump cuts if you need them. On a much more positive note, the quality was great for your first episode. I liked the mix of photography and clips. It makes the content more engaging. Don't be afraid to use more of that. Especially anything Seinfeld related! Lol! I noticed some comments on the video on YouTube stated they didn't like the background music. It didn't bother me. If you have to, maybe just a little lower, but you were smart to use it. It's a great binding agent for the rest of the audio to build on. It also my be interesting to mix the music up with some era appropriate tunes! I also liked how you brought everything back to the present day. I feel like that should be a staple in every episode. Again, this is a great first video. I've been following you since your IGN days and I'm impressed to see how much you have grown. Remember to take the good and bad criticism constructively and try not to take anything negative I or anyone else has said personally. We are there for you and want to see you succeed. Keep up the good work and I look forward to what you have to show us next.

Anonymous

I have a question, I'm not the most knowledgeable person in the comment section, but this has had me thinking all day after watching this, and it has yet to be answered, explained or elaborated on... Can it be debated that Eminent Domain infringes on our 3rd Amendment rights? Sure, the government is required to offer compensation for the land their taking, but to my knowledge the owner cannot deny the property seizing, nor set the price of the compensation... Would love to hear back from somebody more knowledgeable on the subject. Awesome episode, I'm hooked.

Anonymous

Gaming personalities turning to history is probably my favourite thing right now. First Extra Credits, then Colin? If this trend keeps on going I hope I will see some videos on the history of Australia and Ireland from Ross O'Donovan ;) As a Russian who loves history, have to say, this was very interesting to watch. Keep up the good work, Colin! Also you should probably look into releasing the videos through a podcast feed since most of the illustrations in the new video were only complimentary and their lack didn't take away from the content of the talk — if that is the case with all of the videos it will be very nice to also get them as audio files to listen to when on the move.

Christopher Lee
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Podcast versions would be nice I agree. I do want to mention that if you get YouTube red (which I have by default because I pay for google play music or whatever it's called) you can just listen to YouTube videos with your phone screen shut off

Anonymous

Awesome start!

Alex Gates

Really great video! I'm excited to learn from this video series. My only suggestion would be to have music at the beginning and end but take it out for the rest of the video. I say this not because it's bad by any stretch of the imagination, but because it seemed to lull me into a day-dreamy kinda mood and that made it hard to focus. Anyway, just my opinion and I can't wait for what comes next!

Anonymous

Colin, I'm not sure if you'll see this but I wanted to let you know that videos like this as well as your political musings in the past have given me the impetus to engage my local community as we have a big mayoral election today. I might have never written an open letter that will likely be read by hundreds of people, many of whom won't agree with me. But today was the day I felt like if I helped just one voter make their decision by giving my fair and thought out feelings on pertinent topics that I really did something of value today. I just wanted to let you know that and I look forward to all the videos going forward and seeing where you grow this community.

Anonymous

The question I was asking myself the entire time was eventually addressed at the end, but remains ambiguous. I was surprised the 2015 trial was thrown out because they weren't sure of the distinction between military Vs police in reference to the Third Amendment (TA). This seems like a crucial distinction if the amendment is to be upheld. I did a little research and it seems to be assumed the TA applies only to military, but the fact that a clear distinction doesn't exist is odd. It's a big difference and one worth clarifying! What does anyone else thing? Excellent work by the way Colin.

Josiah Lambert

Topic request: history and importance of the filibuster, which has never been more relevant than this week. A good angle to connect history to current events.

Anonymous

Really great content. It really shows just how much research you put in, a lot of great information. It made me think, which is a big reason why I chose to pledge. Great start Colin. I know you as well as this show will continue to grow. Can't wait for the next one!!! I'm happy to be along for the ride.

Dennis Parker

Great video, Colin. I'd love to see an episode on the Federal Reserve Bank

André Brun Didriksen

Thanks to you Colin i am more interesing politics now, i literally had zero interest in it before i saw you on The Rubin Report and The Joe Rogan Experience and it has opened a curiosity i didnt know i had. It would be awsome if you could also talk about Philosophy, european history and politics :-) Than you.

Anonymous
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I concur. This institution has always been an enigma to me. Loved ep. 1!

Joseph Ady

I'd like to hear some fingerpicking classical guitar behind some of your historic videos.

Nathan James Crosby

Thank you Colin first and foremost. I also want to take a moment to thank you all as a community. I saw hundreds of producers on the end of Colin's video. Seriously thank you

Anonymous

Awesome video! I can't wait to see all that you have to say! I hope you do a video about the Lusitania soon!

Anonymous

Colin, you mentioned that the next episode will be quite different and more lengthy and you would let us choose which format we liked better. I'm here to suggest something different. Since the promise was 2 vids per week. How about Mondays we get the 15 min episode and Thursdays we get a more freely and less scripted episode. Sounds like a brilliant plan :) think about it

Anonymous

I preferred the storytelling of the second half to the more standard educational delivery of the first half. Great start though, looking forward to more.

Anonymous

Hey, I loved the video! Content and music was awesome. The graphics playing during the video were nice too. There was just something about the flag during the opening that seemed kind of amateur to me. By no stretch of the imagination is it a deal breaker, but I do like the blue graphics during the video much more👍🏼

Anonymous

Loved the video and the content. As somewhat of a history buff, I was able to follow along pretty well with what you were saying, but there were a few moments where I felt like too much information was coming down the pipe to be understood and interpreted. A little slower speed on the TelePrompTer perhaps? I'd love to see you break down future concepts with other visuals (like a blackboard/dry-erase board), or do a few episodes more in the Ken Burns documentary style. Keep it up! Can't wait to see what the future of CLS holds and happy to be supporting you!

Anonymous

Great video! Reminds me of when I first watched the History Channel when it first arrived;very exciting! I enjoy learning these snippets of history and I'm looking forward to the rest!

Aaron Simon

Though it was great!

George Newton

Fantastic content let's have loads more like this I'm leaning toward history as being my most anticipated content from you Colin

Hansel Tjia

Saw this when it first came out. Love the history knowledge drop and keep them coming.

Hansel Tjia

In terms of feedback, when you're sighting sources, can you possibly also subtitled the documents? Especially when sighting old English cursives. I think it would be helpful to read along as well to absorb the information since everyone learns a little differently. Thanks!

Christopher Hopkins

Loved this dive into something that's not very well covered when people talk about our constitution