Female Possession - Perception Concept 1 (Patreon)
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The biggest difference is who is restraining who. In the first perspective "you" are holding the girl's wrists, and in the second perspective "your" wrists are being held. The blacking out is supposed to be the switching of consciousnesses. But then it doesn't exactly make sense how the parasite's body is being controlled if we are the parasite looking at our own parasite body move from the human's eyes.
Other details to show which body your were in would be the first person clothes on the girls' arms and bosom :3
The last panel is you looking down at the first girl, who fell down unconcious. And you can see your new cleavage :D
In the end, I don't think it is 100% clear that this is a body hop. It can be interpreted as a switch-morph (changing someone to look like you and vice versa). So learning from this lesson, I'd like to show the first person person view of the parasite as it transitions from one body to the next, like slitchering up and out of the first girl's throat, looking back at her, then going into the second girl's mouth and down into her belly, bookended by the two human perspectives with details like first person accessories.
I also think it wouldn't hurt to watch some first person movies for ideas like Hardcore Henry about how to establish a strong first person perspective. I think there's a lot of groundbreaking ideas here that have never been done before and it will be a big success!
- i v