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Unwilling Ovipoisition 1 HD - page 6 (Patreon)

Published:
2016-04-25 04:49:42
Edited:
2016-04-25 04:52:02
Imported:
2022-01

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.psd file: https://www.dropbox.com/s/hw67j3j37m3k53n/Unwilling%20Oviposition%201%20HD%20-%20page%206.psd?dl=0

I have very shakey hands, which is why I use digital means.  In the timelapse video you'll see i have to redraw the same line about 20 times.  I like drawing on paper for fun, but for this type of work it can't have so many basic ugly errors.


In art school I was taught to never tell people mistakes made in my work.  But part of the commentary is to help you learn from my mistakes if you want to draw.


That being said, I really wanted to include action lines in the top panel and bottom-right panel but I'm still not good at them.


- i v

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Anonymous

Not to nit pick but wasn't there a cushion on the stool? Als it kinda seems that she was elongated please don't be offended I Mean only to try and helpNice work btw even with the shakes

invo
>>1698592

Aha, good catch. I will add the cushion :9. Thanks for pointing that out.

Anonymous

Sorry I was editing the comment

invo
>>1698598

Her being elongated was supposed to be part of the action zoom thingy happening, but I couldnt pull off the action lines to you dont get that sense of motion. The scene itself was supposed to be enlongated, but with no reference I admit she herself looks enlongated :/

Anonymous

On the 2nd panel, the face made her looks chubby. :-0 Think maybe u should lessen the curve. Also I see the unjoint line on the face lel.

invo
>>1698648

I'll take a look at the face chubbiness. The unjoint line I left in as an artistic touch but I might fix that later depending how I feel. After a few days the picture looks different to me and I cannot see as many flaws right after the picture is done.

Anonymous

I understand on the unjoint line for artistic part, but unjoint line on the cheek is weird in all sense. Just from my poiny of view.

invo
>>1698697

Yeah I agree. I'll fix that what I fix the cushion. But the chubbiness is an optical illusion since the parasite is blocking her eye. You'll see in the time-lapse I made sure the face is drawn correctly whenI draw it by itself.