Bunny Girl Test Page 1 - Feedback Invited (Patreon)

So, I'm once again experimenting with layout.

For me one of the big ones with this one is font size... I'm thinking I can get more word-dense thought paragraphs at this size. It does I think mean its easier to read if you open full and see at full size. I also wanted to try another 'scroll down' comic style for this one.

How does the layout, font, fontsize, pretty much everything feel to you? It's much easier for me to make big changes to this project at this point before I'm super committed to things like font sizes that would be super jarring to change later.