What do you think of this? (Patreon)

My friend is being lame and won't drop - what do yall think of this?

It's not completely mixed, no background vocals or adlibs -  but the idea is there. 

My friend Jordan made the hook with the idea of "imagine a relationship that makes you feel secure and happy but they leave you for someone else and makes you feel like you're not good enough"

All of his music is hyperpop, which we (me and paul) never did before so one day we told him to make a song and yeah lol. 

What do yall think? Definitely might not be for everyone, wasn't for me at first either until i got curious. 

hook:

it's like i caught you in my vision, stop the bs

need security, like it's tsa

tomorrow's scary, if i knew it's gonna be this way

don't even tell me sh-t is gonna be ok

paul: (he freestyled this so i'm not too sure on the accuracy)

out here living like it's cutthroat

tell me to my face you want more

tell me my love's not enough though

why'd you have to say that?

still chasing these dreams of pushing maybach

iffy iffy, kinda want my bae back

kinda want my bae back, my baby, so crazy

in the membrane, i'm insane for you

tell the waiter he should save a table for two

i wrote a song about you and it's full of haikus 

now i feel like haikyuu, stab me in the back

samurai jack, can't get you back

me:

it's like i never wanna leave ya, feeling like i'm home

always wanna see ya, or hit you on the phone

i give you what you need ya, you never had a home

before me they mistreat ya, ain't put you on ya throne

now you're acting out you're bailing out on our plans

now i'm seeing all the f-ing cracks in romance

remember we would turn the music on and slow dance

and now i'm seeing you with him yall walk and hold hands ya ya

walking out on me you wanna leave with him

the leaves are falling like you when you lean on him

this sh-t is over and we'll never meet again

love f-kd me over and i'll never try again

you played your game on me i'll never forget

broken security right on my doorstep

said she's leaving me, i'll never forget, won't forget