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Mother of Learning Chapter 84: Powerless, a fantasy fiction | FictionPress

Dimly, he was aware that Kirielle rushed inside when he started making noise and then rushed back out screaming for mother to come and help, but he was in no position to react to that. It took all of his strength just to remain conscious and weather the pain.

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Anonymous

What a pleasant surprise

Leaf

Thank you for the chapter :)

Roman

yesss and a good few hours earlier then I expected too

Anonymous

Why so many chapters lately, where basically nothing actually happens? It feels like most of what you wrote for today could have been summed up in five paragraphs.

Anonymous

Earlier than usual. Nice.

Anonymous

Awesome Chapter as always :) Thanks!

Anonymous

As for me I found this chapter fulfilling as any others, there were some character's and world's progression in equal measure. Thematically speaking the laidback chapter is a must at this junction right after and before a big ordeal.

Matthew M

I especially enjoyed this chapter, it brought in a new perspective to quite literally everything they do.

Anonymous

Thanks for the chapter

Anonymous

It was fun to see them cope without use of their magic. I really enjoyed this chapter---it showed what a vacation post-loop would look like for these two and what their relationship might be like if they survive the ordeal in one piece . . . I wonder if things won’t go so well though and they’ll look back on these few restarts as the only time they could really just enjoy their friendship together.

Anonymous

That's one of the things I'm curious about. What things will be like, and what zorian will do after the loop ends and the immediate emergencies are addressed? I'm kinda hoping for a significant epilogue section of the story, with more development of characters like kirielle, Taiven, and Raynie.

NonuvfOorbiz

Thanks! Typos: - He had to know many restarts they still had left >>> He had to know how many restarts they still had left - the ancient lich may be may be able to >>> the ancient lich may be able to - QI (Is this a purposeful abbreviation of Quatach-Ichl?) - He quickly realized this wouldn't as easy as he imagined >>> He quickly realized this wouldn't be as easy as he imagined - as it weightless >>> as if it was weightless or as if weightless

wanderer117

Love the story so far. Typo: - pill that floated in the center of the bottle as it weightless >>> pill that floated in the center of the bottle as if weightless