WIP: Comic Commission Pg 1 & 2 - Jin on the Rocks (Patreon)

Here are the sketchy layouts for the first 2 pages of a 3-page vore themed comic!

This features my big guy Tai (quite the popular one lately) and Jinou's (micro) OC, Jin.

Does the flow of the panels translate well? Can you tell what's happening? Feedback is always appreciated!

The final result will be a fully-rendered 3000 x 3500 pixels, per page.
I'm very excited to work further on this and look forward to having the completed full-rez pages up for you all near the end of October!