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Spotts1701

Pretty good arm for a terrified and concussed young woman.

Nils

Great work thank you. Nice to see that Sue might be able to eat in the kitchen, but I hope you'll let ashley find something effective in the kitchen to defend against Sue.

Anonymous

Did that apple fall? I assume it did, but I didn’t see any stress lines to indicate impact.

wereworld

yeah it was meant to be thrown off frame but it is a little hard to translate that. I'll try to clarify it more in the final pass 👍

Anonymous

Part of what's so fantastic about this, apart from the art/story/characters is........I'm pretty crafty, I can predict every twist/see both possibilities/know where its gonna go. But you manage to outsmart me each time Wereworld and I like it :) 'Horror' has bored me for decades, but this is 'horrific', there's actual tension and I wanna know what happens next.

Alec Whitacre

You could make smaller panels that show it flying through the air, like 3 small panels showing it rolling in the air then just a Thud effect subtitle on the last panel with Sue

wereworld

Thank you, thank you Michael! So glad you're invested in this story. Its only going to heat up from here!! 😁

Anonymous

No worries :) Like I said though, you're a bit of a one man army, you could actually sell this stuff. You know how to do horror, like the actual thing that keeps people on edge/guessing. You also probably have a load more stories in your head, so my advice would be start some rough storyboards and use sue as the north star of your portfolio. I don't do fake praise so I don't say it lightly- but this is 'your thing' and it will get you out of the 9 to 5, good luck :)

Robert Yingling

What happened to pg 22,24-26, 28,36,39,40? Missing some story 😕

wereworld

Hi Robert! If you search 'Chapter 5' you'll get a result for the whole chapter in PDF form :)