Unexpected pg 4 Sketch (Patreon)

HEY! :D I'm back! I've been chomping at the bit to get this page going. I've finally moved in to my new digs and got my setup working again so there shouldn't be another dry spell of content. I'd like some feedback with this page if you would. I want to make sure the page reads correctly. Let me know in the comments if anyone gets hung up reading through it!