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A Girl Named Sue pg14 WIP (Patreon)

Published:
2018-11-03 23:20:13
Edited:
2018-11-03 23:21:50
Imported:
2021-06

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TFW your shoe size instantly changes...

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Kerlem

"What is happening?" Three guesses, kid.

ffkid

Tfw indeed. I like how some of the reaction dialogue was kept! I noticed the nails are no longer just popping off? Deliberate choice?

Anonymous

I find with the foot here (and the hand earlier) you're taking great care to setup an 'anticipation' panel (panel 2) where we see the normal foot immediately followed by the abrupt breaking of the bones (panel 3) as they reshape themselves into their new form. It really adds a lot of life and kinetic energy to the metamorphosis and I think it's some very successful work. Can't wait to see more! :)

wereworld
>>16867776

wow! Thanks so much for the detailed critique! That's EXACTLY what I'm going for with these panels! Glad to see it working :D

Nils

Prretty cool and great style, although the feet transofrmation looks more like a Wereape than a Werewolf, :) Unless I have no idea of how wolf paws look like in that case, sorry

Wuschel

Oof <3

Zockereinstein
>>16883781

It is because the process is done slower, but it is better this way, as long as it emphatizes the "body horror" effect and deploys the pain and fear of the TF in a better timing than others before.